|Reviews for Guides for the Young|
| doat chapter 5 . 11/29
Then they made a FTL alternative using the warp and early gallar fields they found a lost doat ship left for 15 thousand years yet still like it was newly made the ships ai let them in for they are her master's and they got a intact STC with all the broken op weapons and techno sorcerery and the merchant ship became thier flag ship for its black hole cannon and the length of 100 km and with of 30 m and very very helpful and loyal men of stone ai too op? k then
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/29
actually studies show in a few decades the avarage life span will a 100 years old due to better health care and diet
| Val'Hor chapter 5 . 11/17
NOOOOOOOOOO ! I want to read more of this ! I loved reading this story but this is too short ! Please think about coming back to this !
| Eyolf chapter 1 . 9/6
conspirator theoreticians ... ... I know what you mean, but, what happened that you didn't write conspiracy theorists
| AmanoRyo chapter 5 . 7/15
The cliffhanger killed me haha..ha...ha.. Please tell me you have plans for this
| Necromancy94 chapter 5 . 7/9
Why did you stop this was awesome
| RandomReader336 chapter 5 . 6/18
Will there be another chapter? If as, then can't wait for it.
| Francisco914 chapter 3 . 4/29
I wish humanity would create their own form of FTL akin to Halo's Slipspace due to the fact that the Relays are deathtraps wether they realize it or not. Also it would also be beneficial for humanity as they have the capacity to destroy relays without problems in navigation.
| Revliledpembroke chapter 3 . 2/1
the humanity/attaching a few fighters to a ship so small never happened/ the first frieght of mined and refined – not to the level of the Prothean cache, though – Element Zero was ready to be shipped to Earth. As were the freights of light"
You don't say "the humanity", happened should probably be occurred, and nobody uses freight in that manner
| Revliledpembroke chapter 2 . 2/1
James Brown? What's the Godfather of Soul doing there?
| Revliledpembroke chapter 1 . 2/1
Interesting story so far, but you're making some mistakes that are confusing me. Number one, people who fail to believe the official story are conspiracy theorists, not conspiracy theorticians.
At one point, you said spacecrafts when people generally use spacecraft as its own plural (1 spacecraft, 2 spacecraft, etc).
"engineers were carrying double the normal number of those.." For this particular sentence, you can just end it with "carrying the normal number." If you add the "of those," you also need to add something for "those" to refer to. Those what?
Near the end, you said "the left-hand quarter of the room." Why? You could have just said "the left side" or "the left half" or even "the (insert North, South, East, West here) quarter of the room."
| El Espectador chapter 1 . 11/10/2018
this is one of the most great things I've read to far
| nkh1 chapter 5 . 8/25/2018
Hope you come back to this some day...
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/4/2018
That’s it... seriously?
| Ilireanwri chapter 5 . 7/24/2018
Evil cliffhanger. Well Harbinger miscalculated greatly this time... I wonder how he'll react once he finds out the Protheans are still around? Or the shitstorm this will create on the Citadel (Hah, try to excuse your "rich culture" to a live Prothean and why they should just let themselves be enslaved, Batarian... Can't wait to see that conversation).
This story is great. I've never seen a story where multiple Protheans survived before. Are you still intending to continue this story? I really hope you do and that you'll update again as soon as possible.