Reviews for The Past Revisited
Venus Smurf chapter 1 . 3/18/2003
Beautifully done. I loved the fighting scenes, and I thought the dialogue between the characters was just hilarious. I can't wait to see the next chapter!
Mercury Guardian chapter 1 . 12/31/2002
Its interesting. Oh and don't worry about making your chapters really long. Just as long as they aren't really super short I'm fine with them being any length. So far we've only seen Malachite, will the other generals be showing up in this fic? hmmm... guess I'll have to stick around to find out. Keep up the writing.

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