I just love this so far. I love that Anzu has a complicated past, and yet she's very in character so far! And YES you go Seto, inviting her to stay... Mommy's so proud LOL!

Hoping to see an update soon :) Stay safe!

This was pretty good! Hope to see more soon

Finally had a chance to read this through. Very interesting little vignette. I liked that you touched on Seto and Mokuba's parents and remembering them - something canon doesn't do, which is a shame.

Also you have created a very interesting background for Anzu too, I would have never thought of such a thing but I like the touches like the biker gang. I could see Anzu being the sort to hide her pain behind a smile where as Kaiba hides it behind a frown. It was interesting to see their crossover here.

This also had a great sense of place and weather with the torrential downpour and the car. It felt very visceral which I liked. I felt cold and soaking along with Anzu!

Seto's internal monologues were hilarious! I love seeing him fight attraction to Anzu esp his unacknowledged jealousy with both Atem and Yugi!

'"If the shoe fits..." Seto trailed off, crossing his arms over his chest as he did so. Goading Mazaki into shouting at him was the only thing he felt good at in her continued presence. He didn't know what else to do.'

This is perfect, it sums up something I've found now I've (finally) written their long awaited reunion in my fanfic - the fact that Kaiba falls back on old antagonistic habits as a defence and also because it gets a reaction from her. Seeing him gradually warm up is always fascinating but hard to get right. I'm intrigued by the great start you made here.

Also loved the slight implication of him missing Atem and not wanting to acknowledge that because you know I believe that HC 100%!

Tiny note I think you missed a scene break towards the end when POV switches from Anzu to Kaiba as I saw you have a scene break there in A03.

This chapter is anazingly cute,ill say thiss again that ur a great author

OH HELLO

I read this on my phone an hour after you published is in the air.

Ahhhh I was so excited to see you update this! I re read the whole thing and then like half of your other stories! I'm really interested in this take on Anzu not being interested in dance for her own sake for her sister's and living for them. I'm really curious of anzu is going to start living for herself.
I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Thank you so much for the update! Loved every bit of it :D

Hope you are keeping well and safe.

Cait
xx

Ha ha so cute. *Squeal*

Nice going so far. Hope there'll be a continuation. Keep up the good write!

Dear Azurite,

I'm a big fan of your work and I adore your writing style.

Lovely greetings from Germany :)

Ooh how exciting! I'm very interested to see how he reacts when she's so close to him, especially with Molina around. Love how you set the raining setting in the beginning!

I love it, what a great idea to have her as a former yanki. I cant wait to see where this goes!

I'm so glad you're back writing on fanfiction again! What a great intro, I was completely into it! I read What Doesn't Kill You over the summer and loved it, but I wished you had kept going with it. I understand it's hard to pick up after you've been away for a while, but this one that you have is just as great. I'm prepared to read it all the way through!

I couldn't believe it. I hit on the YGO Fandom again just for kicks as I do every so often, AND I AM DO GLAD I DID. You've been one of my favorites for 10 years, and I'm thrilled that you're writing. And I can't wait to see where this goes, emotional torture included.