Reviews for The Obscure Tome
PasiveNox chapter 7 . 10/30/2023
Great chapter nice
PasiveNox chapter 6 . 10/30/2023
Lol anyway great chapter
PasiveNox chapter 5 . 10/30/2023
Great chapter
PasiveNox chapter 4 . 10/30/2023
Lol in this au that end is lol anyway great chapter wonderful
PasiveNox chapter 3 . 10/30/2023
Nice chapter
PasiveNox chapter 2 . 10/30/2023
Great chapter wonderful
OPPRESSOR OF NIGGERS chapter 2 . 2/2/2023
Glad this is dead This was a shit story
DracoKing30 chapter 35 . 1/30/2023
Really love this story can't wait for new chapters
otakusage chapter 35 . 9/2/2022
This is a fun and enjoyable story. Are you still writing. When will the next chapter update may I ask? Can you pm to let me know, thanks.
Niuzu0130 chapter 35 . 8/25/2022
Me lo leí entero en un solo día y solo puedo decir que es mejor de lo que creía. Ahora a esperar otro capitulo
Guest chapter 35 . 5/24/2022
Heh, here comes the vampire hunt.

Now can I make a suggestion? I think that Harry Potter needs to act like an actual person and begin to grow up into a more heroic character more inline with his book counterpart and gains his official abilities. But as he also grows up and in power by obtaining the abilities of an Animagus with his Animal form being a Lion as he grows up into a hero.

But just to make things a little more weird and different than normal maybe you can have Harry walk Odin’s path to power and knowledge because there is a similarity between the two.

Harry already has a pursuit of forbidden knowledge, Harry when he becomes a Master of Death has to traverse the realms of death for more knowledge and also learn The Runes and also Necromancy.

Odin the Allfather did that as well in his pursuit of knowledge. Raising the spirit of a Volva(a Norse Seer) to learn about Ragnarok and also traveling to the land of the dead Niffelheim to learn more about the future.

Odin gave up one of his eyes to Drink at the Well of Mimir for knowledge and Odin died on the World Tree and rose again as a sacrifice of himself to himself. Odin sacrificed who he was for what he was in order to rise up stronger to be what he was meant to become in order master the Runes even when he gained so much knowledge before hand such as learning other paths of magic in the form of Seidr which to the old Norse was Feminine Magic and yet he kept seeking for more knowledge and more power such as the incident with him gaining The Mead of Poetry.

Harry must pull of a move from the Messiah and Odin as Odin rose from the dead more powerful than ever and he already has distinguished scars. Just like Jesus Christ.

What I am saying is dig into all of the Old Norse and Old Germanic Mysticism but also Christian influences from the books. Now make sure that Harry also learns Germanic Shamanism and other old Norse and Germanic Magic.

Speaking of the Runes, I would love it if Harry did learn more Norse Magic and the other powers. Specifically the ones he gained from studying Gandr, Seidr, and then the abilities Odin gained when he learned The Norse Runes and also gaining the Mead of Poetry.

And also Odin is famous for his many loves and learning feminine magic as well as the Norse. Hint, Hint, give him a harem. It is an Emiya Man Family tradition at this point.

But just to make it more awesome maybe Harry Potter also bumps into Merlin in Avalon world in his journey to understanding the magical world and his abilities honoring T.H Whites Once and Future King books with Harry being a spiritual descendant of King Arthur as Wart.

Maybe Merlin takes Harry Potter as an apprentice when the boy decides to try and become his own man. If I were you make sure Harry also gains greater power through study of Norse Magic and Harry after training under Merlin gains control of the elements of Fire, Wind, Water, Ice, Lightning, and Earth!

Speaking of which I would love it if you go all the way with the Norse and also the King Arthur inspiration. And to top it all off take a look at these two games inspired by Norse Mythology I recommend the first Valkyrie Profile Game the second game I recommend is Odin Sphere Leithrasir.

Maybe Harry learns about the full potential of the Runes from meeting one of the legendary Valkyrie’s or Harry bumps into Scathach Harry learns how to fight and gains mystical skills of the mages from both games and his official ones and he also becomes an Animagus to honor his birth father and the Marauders. And Harry also makes the Psyphers. The protagonists weapons in Odin Sphere Lethrasir.
Makuro767 chapter 17 . 2/18/2022
During Japan's Warring Era, a Samurai's wife and children support him by putting makeup on the decapitated heads of his enemies before being presented to his ruling lord. Imagine that scene; Honey, I got them! Oh, put them there while I go get the makeups!
ElementalMaster16 chapter 35 . 1/10/2022
This is a pretty interesting story, I really want to see where the plot is going.

I would like to point out a few small inconsistencies though, namely Illya not going to Hogwarts though she did get a letter, and another inconsistency where Harry tests out of history entirely only to just skip 2 years in the next chapter.

Anyway, please update soon!
Rosalind Fairchilde chapter 35 . 12/29/2021
I'm looking forward to the next update but I noticed some minor discrepancies. Like in chapter 24 Ilya got a hogwarts letter along with Shiro and Harry yet in chapter 33 she's teaching Magical Biology and NOT at hogwarts so I'm just wondering how exactly she ended up not going. And chapter 30 mentions Harry passed his History of Magic NEWT yet he was only allowed to skip up to second year History of Magic. If he had passed the NEWT wouldn't that mean he had successfully tested out given that's an exam for seventh years?
GiveMeBackMyFreedomFandoms chapter 35 . 12/14/2021
I have questions:
Why did Shirou summon Tamoe? Why did Harry summon Vlad considering he used the Tome as his Catalyst?
What's happening with Archer? He's a counter guardian version of Shirou from a very different universe so how did the knowledge from the Tome change things for him?
Why'd you say Dumbledore is related to Lily? What happened to Remus between him being drunk and the chapter where he met with Dumbledore? Considering Harry and Shirou are at Hogwarts will they meet Wormtail? Considering you're doing year one what happened to the philosopher stone? You never mentioned the threat of death on the 3rd floor. Is Quirlellmort not teaching DADA?
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