good story

Honestly, I am always feel some kind of dumbness in this story, but in this chapter I think it is on an another level. Really, u can imagine someone act like Liv or Scorp? No way, people and their feeling not work like this. It is a little bit idiotic motivation behind the characters for fake drama.

Dumb as hell. The last one was the peak of this nonsense but it is really close to that.

Dumb dzory as hell.

honestly I don't even know how many times I've reread this entire story. absolutely love it !

very nice

Is the chapter ‘I found a martyr in my bed tonight’ from the song Some Night by Fun? I’m just wondering. You can PM with your answer. My user name is HarryPotter12980.

Hey !

You know what, I like your story ! So much thinhs to say, I will review this one : I didn't sleep a lot tonight cause I read your story instead.

Vive Scorpius ! Vive Rose !

Oscar Le Carlin.

I'm sorry, I had to post this PM that I received bc it made me laugh so much and I hope it makes some of you laugh as well xx - Rach

honestly, I ship rose and scorp, gen and al, and liv and toby as much as the next person, but there are SO many different ships i could get behind. rose x gen bc they’re pure and gen is a fucking badass bitch with major bde, scorp x toby bc let’s be real i genuinely ship toby with every single person in this fic, al x toby who are ACTUALLY my otp don’t me their chemistry has been ridiculous from the party during chapter 17, scorp x gen because she will not put up with his shit and she is the only one he will bottom for, gen x liv bc they give off major wlw energy in all of their scenes together, rose x toby because they’re cute and based on the last chapter they would play chess together and are both chill ppl, rose x liv bc they can bitch about what a dumb boi scorpius is, scorp x al bc they’re both hot and would have hot sweaty quidditcj sex sorry i don’t make the rules, oop i forgot gen x toby but they would work too, i actually have a soft spot for liv x scorp esp with their end scene but we do not stan toxic relationships in this house. i guess i don’t ship liv x al bc i don’t see it but literally everyone else works. oh and we do not ship incest here so rose and al are out, vetoes are in (also don’t mind me while i cop the veto idea for spin the bottle in rl). you know what, i ship scorpius toby and al as a throuple and i ain’t fucking sorry.

The first time I read this chapter I was so overwhelmed I had to hold off reviewing until I had time to read it again. (Time was not kind to me). One of my favourite recurring things in this story is how all knowing McGonagall always is. She’s a wise woman after all, and all the little nuances in the scenes with her have been perfect. But the thing that got me in this final chapter was just how hard she ships them, and I’m here for it. Whether it’s meant to be knowing, or meddling, or just possessing a warmer heart than she lets on, it was nice to see her final call on the matter at hand.
You managed to capture Rose and Scorpius’ longing and heartbreak with such an intensity, I do think that’s partially the reason I had to read it again...and again. I could literally feel my heart breaking along with theirs as they navigated their feelings, insecurities while skating around one another, STILL apparently oblivious to how the other feels. These babies need to hit the books... of love.
All the other resolutions resolutioning is probably a close second moment (moments?!) in this final chapter for me. Scorpius&Liv, Scorpius&Toby, Al&Rose, Rose&Liv... just. Ah! You’ve created a masterpiece here. Nothing felt rushed at the end and not everything was a neat bow of water under the bridge. It felt so organic and believable.
And through all that, the level of fluff at the end there was a pure and joyous 100. You’re a superstar of the fan fiction world in my book. Outstanding.

I'm sure there's going to be a lot of "distractions" for Scorpius that will NOT involve dear Olivia

Thank you so much for this lovely story. I’m sad that it’s over but the end really did it justice. I wish we could see how the next five years are going to go between all these characters. And thank you for answering our questions and responding to our comments. Just overall thanks! Until next time... (because I’m going to keep an eye out for your other works).

ALBUS AND SCORPIUS BECOMING BROS
We still stan Toby tho

I really enjoyed the story. It was a tad too angsty for my usual tastes but it was still enjoyable. Sometimes it was a bit incoherent, just small jarring things that take you out the story and make you wonder if you missed something. Kinda like, wait, when did that happen? And then a few paragraphs later you realize that I was never mentioned before then so you didn’t miss anything, but you already had been taken out of the story to wonder. Just a note.

Another thing that bothered me is the whole Liv/Scorpius/Toby thing. I feel like you wrote Liv inconsistently. At the beginning of the chapter Rose and her talk and she’s still in love with Scorpius and you get the sense that if Scorpius were to say “let’s try again” she would totally jump at the chance and try again, but then at the ball her and Scorpius talk and it’s like she’s just his friend again and completely in love with Toby?

I’m hoping there will be an epilogue where we get to see how Scorpius actually opens up to Rose. I want to see them talk about the issues more because honestly I feel like a few paragraphs about how he’s so happy doesn’t really make up for how miserable he seemed for the last few chapters. I mean, not being able to sleep properly for months because of how terrified you are doesn’t really scream healthy relationship to me. And a single line about “you can’t run away again” kinda makes Rose seem like she’s going to be just as insecure about the whole thing. I get that they’re teenagers and figuring it all out but... Seems like it’s not really a HEA yet is what I’m getting at. And I’d like to seen them actually get to their HEA.