Bis auf Jaeharys/Val ist die Geschichte sehr gut.

Great is great. When will Elia finally die? Will we get more Jaeherys&Aelor scenes? Hope the Jae in the south stays without Ygritte pairing.

Strong shield, Stronger sword

This was my 2nd re read of this fic in the last year and it's still as great as ever.

When Argon flew down on baleron's back, I got goosebumps all over my skin even if I'd already known what was about to happen. And when Aelor proclaimed that Aegon truly was the prophesied prince, it felt as if I was reading the glorious end of an epic fantasy.

I loved it. Please keep this proclamation of the prophesied prince intact in the rewritten version.

That’s a very weak line or argument for Aelor.

Your story is written very well and I congratulate you for it. Unfortunately I don’t like stories where the Targaryens winit doesn’t seem fair and fit. So I am going to stop reading now but thank you for this story.

Good luck and write some more

Stronger sword indeed. Honestly, this is annoyingly good. I severely dislike a lot of plot points and some character choices in this story. Yet, they make too much sense and feel fairly realistic (from skewed fantasy world point of view :D), for me to dismiss what I've read as wasted time. Thanks for the story ;)

I'm just gonna say, Manfred Arthur. No cap

I mean, Aelor is totally right, both Rhaegar and Lyanna were retarded and brought whole realm into war. You would thin "Jon" would have realized it by now.

Meh, not fan of pairing.

Don't like the pairing but ok. It just came totally out of nowhere.

Barrristan just gave up valuable hostage?

I'm sorry how could ten men do all this? It would be understandable in other circumstances but right now Kings landing is in tararyen control and Lannisters have been kicked out.

already have no respect for mc, leaves kingdom to the mad king when he is okay with killing his brother? leaves his mother to be raped by the mad king when he is okay with killing his brother? just go and kill the king right now! why even wait, or take your mother with you, so many things that couldve been done

love this fic

Burning tunnels would have killed everyone, not necessarily due to the fire but for the smoke and lack of oxygen in a closed area.