|Reviews for The Dragon of Duskendale|
| OneDocToHealThemAll chapter 21 . 3/2
That’s a very weak line or argument for Aelor.
Your story is written very well and I congratulate you for it. Unfortunately I don’t like stories where the Targaryens winit doesn’t seem fair and fit. So I am going to stop reading now but thank you for this story.
Good luck and write some more
| MrScorch chapter 72 . 1/11
Stronger sword indeed. Honestly, this is annoyingly good. I severely dislike a lot of plot points and some character choices in this story. Yet, they make too much sense and feel fairly realistic (from skewed fantasy world point of view :D), for me to dismiss what I've read as wasted time. Thanks for the story ;)
| MrScorch chapter 18 . 1/11
I'm just gonna say, Manfred Arthur. No cap
| mukkaar chapter 44 . 1/8
I mean, Aelor is totally right, both Rhaegar and Lyanna were retarded and brought whole realm into war. You would thin "Jon" would have realized it by now.
| mukkaar chapter 36 . 1/8
Meh, not fan of pairing.
| mukkaar chapter 34 . 1/8
Don't like the pairing but ok. It just came totally out of nowhere.
| mukkaar chapter 25 . 1/8
Barrristan just gave up valuable hostage?
| mukkaar chapter 24 . 1/8
I'm sorry how could ten men do all this? It would be understandable in other circumstances but right now Kings landing is in tararyen control and Lannisters have been kicked out.
| jack gofyourself chapter 1 . 12/22/2022
already have no respect for mc, leaves kingdom to the mad king when he is okay with killing his brother? leaves his mother to be raped by the mad king when he is okay with killing his brother? just go and kill the king right now! why even wait, or take your mother with you, so many things that couldve been done
| Reina36 chapter 72 . 12/14/2022
love this fic
| yorud chapter 52 . 12/1/2022
Burning tunnels would have killed everyone, not necessarily due to the fire but for the smoke and lack of oxygen in a closed area.
| yorud chapter 48 . 11/30/2022
I've yet to read a ff in which Jon/Jaehaerys doesn't fall in love with Ygritte, I understand the plot needs it as Jon is always the bridge between the free folk and the 'kneelers'.
The other thing is that in every ff, Ygritte always dies quite tragically, I wonder what will happen on this one.
| yorud chapter 36 . 11/30/2022
I'm a die hard Ashara supporter, but only because I rarely see her in relationship dynamics. However your Alysanne Lefford was really fun to read, at the very least I expected her to be a friend/companion for Aelor and I'm pretty sure I'll like her as his wife.
| yorud chapter 33 . 11/30/2022
The violin... *cheff's kiss
| yorud chapter 11 . 11/29/2022
Rhaegar is as irritating as I imagined him to be.
Ffs I want to kill him myself