|Reviews for A Life on Hold|
| Faery66 chapter 5 . 7/5/2019
Hope to read more soon.
| Duo-Harmony-in-the-Dark chapter 5 . 2/27/2019
| Dezzi95 chapter 5 . 5/7/2018
Please come back to this story! I'm dying to see how this story goes!
| Death's Childe chapter 1 . 4/6/2018
Please continue this. I really want to read more. I am quite intrigued.
| Guest chapter 5 . 11/7/2017
good story hope you update
| Lumcer chapter 5 . 10/2/2017
Oh I desperately wish there was more! Please return to this story!
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/28/2017
Please come back and complete this. It is far to good to be abandoned. Well written and neatly plotted.
| Amarante96 chapter 5 . 5/16/2017
This is bloody amazing! Poor Harry and Luna... but I think I might be wired a little diff from Mione tho XD I mean I understand why she's so worried bout Luna (since Harry has always been a survivor and 'stronger' in a way) but honestly speaking I'm personally more worried bout Harry...
I mean, he's been there being tortured for months now and the physical damage and pain he's in must be terrible (even if he is immortal and has a stronger psych) like seriously even if his wounds heal the fact that they did cause pain won't just disappear and the damage done to his mental wellbeing is bound to be huge - not to mention the fact that for the past week he's had to watch his little Sister be tortured in front of his very eyes knowing fully well that she's only there because of him and that if he gave their torturers the answers they wanted she wouldn't be hurt so badly (even if logically he knows that there's no way umbitch would actually let them go or not hurt them)...
Harry is strong but we all know that he's a hero to the very end and there's no chance that he isn't blaming himself for her pain... in other words for every bit of physical torture Luna receives he is being tortured psychologically... (which I'm aware is why u had her kidnapped in the first place but still)
No matter how strong he may be I'm so damned worried bout his mind... what use is an immortal body against emotional torture... and while I am worried about Luna, she at least has only been there a week to Harry's 6 months and has had contact (even if only mental) with the outside world... also I highly suspect that her being kept alive is quite high up the baddies list of priorities since keeping her alive and tortured is more useful to break Harry...
Either way I can't wait till they get the hell out of that damned place (btw I still don't understand why magneto would help umbitch when technically she would likely have wanted ppl like the mutants culled and collared like werewolves but meh)
| wildtrance chapter 5 . 5/2/2017
Die Umbitch. Die in a damn manure pile.
I hate her.
Please save Luna and Harry!
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/4/2017
Oh I so,hope,you are still writing and that all is well since the move please say you are still writing your Harry Potter crossovers of x men and avengers
| Thefriendyouhate chapter 5 . 8/25/2016
Luv it keep writing can't wait for more
| ArwenScamander chapter 5 . 8/1/2016
Update please! This story is so good!
| lunar and solar girl chapter 5 . 7/8/2016
| Kimmiekitten75 chapter 5 . 6/23/2016
More Please! I need to know what happens next!
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/11/2016
This is awesome! PLEASE UPDATE!