Reviews for Benefits of old laws |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Muhahaha there's nothing like adopting your mortal enemy. |
![]() ![]() Realmente cuando lei la frase en latín empecé a reír porque está gravada en los muros de mi escuela y es motivo de orgullo para nosotros y es muy muggle |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a fun story to read. |
![]() ![]() Baby Bella? That's something I'd love to see. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know of one story where male!Harry gets banished to an AU where all genders (as well as the usual gender roles) are swapped. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the 'enemy team up' thing going in the file room. I think more scenes of it would've been better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok, just started the chapter, but since when is Hermione's father named Fabian? Dan is his name... |
![]() ![]() ![]() When Harry was expecting visitors his thought was 'had he heard someone apparate?' Later, less than 50 paragraphs after, he said "as I don't know what apparation is..." Those two facts can't both be true at the same time. If he doesn't know what apparation is, his though narration shouldn't name drop it. If he's aware of the ability's properties due to exposure (AKA in the graveyard), but not what it's named, he should've thought of it in general terms, rather than the actual name. |
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![]() ![]() Good grief, dear author! We love your story! |
![]() ![]() I loved PoS! It was awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg I love your depiction of Voldemort and his sense of humor |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just a Spade casually dropping by again ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoying the story thanks |