Reviews for Benefits of old laws |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well I started this story 6 days ago and I’m enjoying the story immensely and can’t seem to put it down…it’s impeded my sleep process. Your story is that good. Loving everything, though I have to wonder who Harry’s girl or boy would be yet? Onward I read. Take care and be well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm the first reviewer of 2025, since 2024! Wahoo! When I saw how many words this story was it kinda freaked me out. In the past it would take me around 2 weeks or so to read that long a story. So far your story is intriguing, different to see a story told by LVs POV. Wonder how things will go with Harry? Good or Bad? Onward I read. Take care and be well! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don’t know how many times I read this story, and I always read it like it’s the first time.. it’s so enjoyable! the rollercoaster in the plot and the characters building are phenomenal and so reasonable. But some times I don’t read the end so i don’t cry like when i did the first read. This’s really one of my fav all time:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Tom is using Harry’s money and now one of his houses to torture people. I really hope Harry doesn’t begin to think Tom is being a good parent. It stills feels incredibly manipulative by Tom, very Stockholm syndrome. This is a very interesting story but difficult to understand how Snape has been won over. Thank you for sharing your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() There are a number of things nagging at me with this story but chiefly that Riddle will control the Potter accounts and they are going to live in a Potter house. You previously wrote there was no Slytherin money so it appears that Harry will now be funding and housing Riddle. I suspect you mean Riddle to have funds from somewhere but that is not clear. It really changes the dynamics if the relationship is viewed through the lens of the Potters paying for everything. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You asked the question as to whether the relationship is realistic. I think that within the bounds of your story the relationships are well structured and defined. Whether it is likely that a boy who has suffered as HP has at the hands of Riddle would ever be able to build a relationship with him is less clear. However you are doing a good job in giving reasons why it is possible to suspend reality. I am enjoying your story very much particularly all the various viewpoints. Thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very interesting story. I am enjoying how the different characters are responding to the new situations. Thank you for sharing your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read this on Ao3 but Im excited to see it here and reread this story. In the real workd there are weird laws still ‘on the books’ in every villiage/town/city/county/state/country and the insular wizarding world of Great Britain that we are given by JKR would absolutely be filled with thousands of strange laws with a million loopholes. |
![]() ![]() Black shoulda got 3 million for slander 5 million taking away a Lords wand. And 10 million for each year in prison. |
![]() ![]() Chapter is not long at all . Some stories on have chapters that would take most readers over 12 minutes to read ..This took less than 3 minutes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was great but sad. My mom has dementia and has lost herself, so I understand why Marvolo did what he did. |
![]() ![]() The word is sent not send. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Acio dementor orders... It annoys me when people mis-use skligro you don't use it on broken bones it's used to regrow bones. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Funny vanquish does not have to mean kill. It can also just mean to stop. I'd say in this case as Harry has given Tom his sanity back it should have been fulfilled unless Tom is not the dark Lord of the prophecy. |