Da-Da Potion

Great epic! Thoroughly enjoying it!

I must admit to being appreciative of our collective nouns myself. I particularly like a murmuration of starlings

Hallo, ich bin dir so unendlich dankbar für diese wundervolle Geschichte. Gerade das private Treffen zwischen unseren beiden Tränke Profis war so wundervoll geschrieben! Ich finde es absolut genial wie du das gemacht hast und nicht auf das, was eigentlich viele schreiben würden, dass sie sich erst mal empört oder wie auch immer zurückzieht, es ist einfach nur wundervoll erfrischend und freut mich ungemein. Genau wie auch alle anderen Teile und Charaktere dieser tollen Geschichte. Schreibe es auf Deutsch Germany, da ich leider kein Englisch kann lasse mir die Geschichte auch ins Deutsche übersetzen und auch übersetzt ist es einfach nur unglaublich genial geschrieben!

this whole story was... incredible. I literally have no words. NEVER has a 100 chapter story managed to keep my attention fully till the end without annoying me... and never have I read one that ended in a well thought out and satisfactory way (even if it was sad). Thank you so much for sharing your incredible gift for writing with us 3

why is he called Henry? dont get me wrong i understand Voldy calling him different name. I understand using his other name in direct speech, but why use it in sentense like "holding the chain for henry to take". The only reason were this might make sense is that Harry himself felt need to change his name to show he changed and so he himself will start to call himself something different. But that certainly is not the case at this point in the story.
Somehow this feels like more like you, the author, didnt like Harry and wanted to write story in HP universe but didnt want to take Harry along with it

Finally finished this story. I have to be honest, i didnt like the ending at all, but the other 108 chapters were brilliant. Thank you

this is one of the best i read till now

I thoight Montague was captain not Warrington

Didn't Cormac commit attempted murder? Why was he only sent to another school?

I’ve not come across a story this intriguing in quite awhile, I am really liking how you’ve added this obscure old law for good old Voldy to reintegrate himself legally! Is it safe to assume that later chapters will explain how he has “more” of his soul to be on the more sane side?

While i usually hate reading epilogues, this one was nice and.. fulfilling, i. The end. I can't say i absolutely loved this fanfic, because i didn't.. there were many ups and downs. But I did like it and epilogue was a fine end.

"Somehow Harry felt self-conscious about his wish to become an artist."
Damn, that makes me want to joke about famous German Artist that wasn't famous for his artistic talents, but for how many people he sl ughtered in the war...

Imho, that's the good riddance. There's is nothing short of a rabid beast that van be used to describe Fenrir from canon

Looking back, I'm not too sure why I tasted this fic so high on the initial reading. I guess it fitted the emotional state of the moment then, and it's still one of the best mentor!Voldi fics out there.
Sadly, now, on second reading in more sober state of mind and with vast experience I now have in HP fanfics, this one falls a little short. If I had to point out some flaws here, it's too bloated in words, a lot of passages expound on people feelings, versus my preferred way of story telling of people demonstrating their feelings with their actions instead. And it's artificially out of touch with reality the way woke leftists tend to act.
Nobody heavily opposed Voldi adopting Harry because author knew he was "good". Harry's gf is an eccentric Luna and it seems if there was more so called "diverse" girl in Hogwarts, he would be paired with her instead. One of the first projects for Snape was finding a way for gay couples to have kids with a surrogate mother. Wizards trying to return a custom of "kept woman" got life in Azkaban which is unusually harsh and there was no problems with trials, even when it was purebloods using traditions on mudbloods. Most of death eaters turned out to be misunderstood and are actually sweethearts. Sirius Black got paired with literally black girl who is a strong and independent woman. And before that he was openly bisexual.

Make no mistake, it's a pretty good fanfic, but some moments jar me.

Fella should really comb through his author notes as most of the fics he recommends have been abandoned circa 2016.
I do not read unfinished fics on principle, too many heartbreaks after I got overly attached to the story only to abruptely pitch off the story at the "end".