I generally dislike time travel stories that have Harry interacting with his parents and their peers, but you pulled it off beautifully with none of the cliches to which other writers have fallen prey. Thanks for sharing your talent! Hoping to find a completed sequel to read.

FYI, Brighton is on the southeast coast of England, over 400 miles from the border with Scotland. You might want to fix the line about it being 80 miles from Hogsmeade.

You could specify when this is... i assume that this is 6th year..

Outstanding story!

If that's how they treat Peter then I can see how he started to resent him. Not that it's an excuse for what he does in canon but I can see why he might have went to look for other friends

Great chapter

Harry and Tonks r sibling goals fr

Damn this us real personal for harry

Imagine being yelled at by harry potter like I would die

Good start keep going!

Nice one, mate.

I just want to say I loved this. I'm so sad it has ended. I am excited to see a sequel when or if it is out. Keep up the good work.

I just finished your story and really enjoyed it. I hope that you continue it. I’d love to see where you take this.

(last review was posted before it was done)
so after snape uses the mudblood insult and uses a deadly spell (it removed a chunk of stone from the wall)
Harry still decides to accept snape as a friend without question?
We know from the books that Snape called Lily a mudblood at the end of fifth year, and that she refused to speak to him afterwards, she also called out him attacking muggleborns with his slytherin friends. (He defends it with that he isn't attacking her)

You are making Snape to innocent here, by now he likes tormenting people and are working on creating his own deadly dark cursesectumsempra is written down in this years potions book)

so after snape uses the mudblood insult and uses a deadly spell (it removed a chunk of stone from the wall)