If that's how they treat Peter then I can see how he started to resent him. Not that it's an excuse for what he does in canon but I can see why he might have went to look for other friends

Great chapter

Harry and Tonks r sibling goals fr

Damn this us real personal for harry

Imagine being yelled at by harry potter like I would die

Good start keep going!

Nice one, mate.

I just want to say I loved this. I'm so sad it has ended. I am excited to see a sequel when or if it is out. Keep up the good work.

I just finished your story and really enjoyed it. I hope that you continue it. I’d love to see where you take this.

(last review was posted before it was done)
so after snape uses the mudblood insult and uses a deadly spell (it removed a chunk of stone from the wall)
Harry still decides to accept snape as a friend without question?
We know from the books that Snape called Lily a mudblood at the end of fifth year, and that she refused to speak to him afterwards, she also called out him attacking muggleborns with his slytherin friends. (He defends it with that he isn't attacking her)

You are making Snape to innocent here, by now he likes tormenting people and are working on creating his own deadly dark cursesectumsempra is written down in this years potions book)

so after snape uses the mudblood insult and uses a deadly spell (it removed a chunk of stone from the wall)

I'm loving this story so far! I love all your making the Marauders always fall on each other, the funny pranks and everything! Things are of course getting way more serious here now and I love how you are portraying all these people! Thanks for a wonderful adventure to read!

And I've reached the end of this story. I hope that you do find the story for year Seven and beyond, because with Harry's actions so far, I can't see Peter taking the Dark Mark, and there is still time for Severus and Regulus to keep their arms clean as well.

Now I'm off to check your profile for other stories

Greatly enjoying the story so far, and find it kind of amusing that Peter is actually the most likeable of the Marauders so far. I also like the growing friendship between Harry and Severus, as well as Regulus.

After I finish this story I'll check to see what else you've written.

This is a really interesting story. I do think your Harry a bit OOC (too much crying, and the friendship with Severus feels difficult to support to me given the older version's behavior toward him), anbd the fact that history really hasn't shifted much also feels a bit odd. All that said, you have a nice job of plotting the sixth year and do lay some great foundations for change if you really choose to stand on them. I hope you'll notify those like me who follow this story of its sequel here should you choose to post one and thank you for your hard work on this story.