Reviews for The drop
reaver216 chapter 1 . 3/29/2019
Great start here, try using more descriptive words and try making it longer please use something to show someone is talking and don't forget to capitalize Astro as it is his name. That is all the advice I can think of and I hope you update soon I'll be looking forward to reading it
LegionnaireBlaze chapter 1 . 4/17/2018
Needs work. I like it.
Jacob Phantom chapter 1 . 12/30/2015
please update your story
newguy.126548 chapter 1 . 10/18/2015
Nice job! You should do more of this!