|Reviews for Broken|
| Guest chapter 26 . 9/2
I've returned to read this after 13yrs, you've changed a lot but if still reread it so maybe do a sdsdolid and finish it OR repost the original
| Silent Killing chapter 4 . 4/12
The story would be very good. The OC is quite cool as well. But it feels like you're skipping chapters? Idk.
I can't keep track on what's going on. The redone chapters were perfect though.
| Charlottees chapter 1 . 4/24/2015
Your OC is kind of annoying and bitchy and rude. But your writing seems okay, a few to many -ing sentence openers. This isn't a flame I just thought I'd offer my honest thoughts. But it seems pretty creative so far! I will give tis story a chance :)
| Demon75789 chapter 27 . 10/12/2014
I took the risk and read this and I must tell you I greatly enjoyed this story. You are a skilled writer. I loved it. I hope you do not mind my leaving this review.
| Rainbowlalaland chapter 3 . 6/8/2014
is there lag between chapter 3 and chapter 4 because i was reading it ( i know you said you werent going to finish it but my imagination ca make up for whatever isnt finished) and it didnt make since as a switched chapters. i feel like i skipped a chapter but i didnt
| Baby doll chapter 27 . 2/8/2014
I love this. This is the saddest cliff hanger ever! However, I do understand if you do not want to continue writing anymore. But do know that I'll bookmark this in hopes that you'll continue it!
| VampireElf chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
Really like ur story and I understand u have ur own reasons for not continuing it. However if u don't mind me asking: why r u not continuing? It makes sense that u are NOT continuing but just asking why. Again seriously good fanfic and loved every chapter! Hope I'm not offending u! :)
| Sunsetcheetah chapter 1 . 9/11/2013
Awesome_ I read this story so many years ago! Finally remembered my password to my account! Hope you continued it to the end!
| jenn chapter 3 . 1/24/2013
your legolas is completely different from the one from LOTR.
| dee chapter 4 . 9/20/2011
What's wrong with your story? It keeps missing chapters?
| Liv08 chapter 5 . 6/16/2011
Me again...I just left you a review and I am rereading Broken but some of the chapters I remember reading are missing and it doesn't make sense...there is a chapter missing between the 3rd and 4th and another between the 4th and 5th. Please please please put them back so I can read them ,(
| Liv08 chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Hi...I am new to fanfiction...I actually just created an account about 2 minutes ago to leave you a review that I am not certain you will receive. I read the first part of Broken over 7 years ago when I was in jr. high and I fell in love with it. Now that I am in college I finally found it again after scouring the internet for it...but I read your bio and discovered that it will sadly remain unfinished. Since it was so long ago you might not even ever read this but I really wish you would one day decide to finish it. I was never a fanfiction person but Broken was the only story I ever read and I love it still to this day. There is yet one Broken fan still left who remembers and loves your story. ~Liv )
| DrippytheDragon chapter 17 . 4/27/2011
I know on you profile you said that you wouldn't be continuing this, so don't worry i won't bug you to carry on with it :p but, if you do decide to pick this story up i would be delighted :}
I just wanted to review to compliment you on your amazing writing skills, i wish i could write like you! your ideas are all awesome and you also manage to get them all across without confusing it (which is what i do!)
whatever made you stop writing this, i hope you don't take to heart and i wish you all the best for your next dose of writing, whatever it is :)
All the best! :) xxx
| Tsusha chapter 1 . 6/6/2010
hey! uh..i didn't read this story cause i read your profile first and all. but i was wondering, just to state my curiosity, why did you decide to leave it unfinished? and maybe, what's it about? (i don't want to have to waste my time reading it when i'll just be disappointed by lack of completion.) summery is kind of unnecessary but i'm curious as hell as to what got over 2000 reviews. anyways, thanks for your time.
| TheColdFlame chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
I know what you said about not wanting to receive reviews but read this anyways don't worry i won't ask you to continue writing : )
I haven't actually read this but i was reading your profile and was wandering as to why you did stop writing it, just a question you don't have to answer it i was just wandering, does the last chapter you wrote end on a big cliffie? cuz if not i might read it anyways cuz i have run out of good stuff to read, don't worry i won't review or anything telling you to keep writing lol. So anyways I was just wandering why you stopped writing this, its none of my business really but what can i say? I'm a curious person : ) if you don't wanna reply don't bother :)