I love this! You wrote the characters perfectly 3

You know, you're right about one thing though. Mabel is a precious cinnamon roll :)

I love this! This is the exact Gravity Falls fanfiction I like to read. Finally the pines family tension is getting acknowledged and solved in the end, and we get to see more of Dipper and Mabel's sibling relationship, and watch it be tested. I love it, keep up the good work!

Okay, I seriously don't understand all the hate that Mabel gets, she's not meant to be a character who needs to learn lessons like Dipper does, she's meant to be some one who has to come to terms with growing up, but even then it's okay to be a little childish. You also have to understand what she's going through at this moment in the story, she had just learned that her Grunkle wasn't what he seemed, and yet she trusted him anyway, if it weren't for that, Ford would still be stuck in the portal, I also think the reason Dippers been spending less time with her isn't just because of Ford, it may also be the fact that she doesn't really trust her right now, and he may also believe that she's technically been selfish to him all summer when that could be further from the truth. As much as I don't like Dipper and Mabel vs the future, I could see why it's an emotional episode, it just pains me to see Mabel so upset. I really would've wanted to see a situation like this in the episode, where Dipper and Mabel forgive each other after the monster hunt, and she even makes peace with Ford, I just wish the episode ended like that. But then we would get Bills reaction to this moment, and he is angry, he was counting on Dipper and Mabel fighting with each other so he could get the rift, now that's no longer an option, so he decides no more mr nice guy, if he's gonna unleash Weirdmageddon, he's gonna have to get nasty. I don't know how, but I think that's what would've happened

Ekkkkk This was posted On my 7th birth day

Amazing story to end my night and start my morning.

This is beautiful. I love Mabel so much, and I've never understood why people ever gave her hate. Sure, maybe she was selfish sometimes, but all of them were. I think everyone in this story was very much in character, and you did a wonderful job

This was so cute! Such a great story, I’m excited to read more of your stories! 3

Aww I love it! Unfortunately, the hate is still very much a thing, 3 years later, but hey, it's stories like these that make me smile! Mabel is still my favorite character and always will be, and I really wish we could've gotten something like this in the show!

But also DANG THOSE WORDS HURT! I really felt all the emotions!

My heart broke

I cried when I read this. Good story and keep up the good work. :)

Aww, what? Who could hate her?! She actually can cough up glitter! And that sounded much better in my head than it did out loud.
Anyway, she's so kind and sweet, who could hate her?

I love it. It really make me feel so sad, like a whole in my chest. It was wonderful.

Wow. I thought she might be really angry and say 'I hate you' or a curse word, but damn. That was effectively the worst thing she could've said. Remind me not to get in an argument with you.

:')