This is quite literally one of the best fanfic crossovers ive read, ill admit the zetsu coming back was eh , but i really love the plot man , i have reread this fic so many times throughout the years because of how good it is , if you still are active you gotta continue i bet you

Interesting that the rasengan is orange in this. It's not too talked about but Narutos rasengan is yellow/orange in the manga, because everyone has different chakra colors. It's not touched up on in the anime so they just made them all Blue instead, not that im complaining

Harems are for degenerates.

Why is the story is so many ch different from the Reading one your made. It's totally different. It's confusing. I planned to read the Shinobis alliance reading story first, and continue this story from there. But both are totally different stories with Smuts including it. I don't mind reading Smuts. But the story is some what different.

I just realized something. Is it possible that Erza is Naruto's Daughter?

So let me get this straight Sayla is a sex slave basically, that is all you have shown of her. Naruto is God now right the strongest being correct? Now he’s being used as a pawn, it’s a good story but it’s pathetic I’ll give it some time before I come back to this to try and finish it but I doubt it. To me the whole point of a crossover would be for that character to either change the whole story or follow the origin plot but it’s like you’re scared to try something then following the plot

I just can’t get over how Naruto has been alive for thousands or hundreds of thousand years and yet he spends what a year? With fairy tail and now he’s completely changed? Some times it’s like Naruto is just a side character

I get it’s for the plot but Naruto beat them and after everyone has seen what he could do. He should of taken over dropped them out of the contest and then gave up the leadership I feel like that would of been a different direction to consider or maybe you did who knows. It’s a great story so far

Thank god you stoped this garbage

Fucking bizarre that you were flamed and received death threats for fanfiction, but that pathetic sort isn't worth mentioning. I'll admit to not liking the direction the story went, but that's mostly because of his kid (that he wasn't aware of despite being super ninja jesus), cause anything bad involving kids/babies is just something I'm not comfortable with. Despite that, I still enjoyed the story. It's hard finding stories with an OP protagonist that doesn't feel like a complete drag to read. You've got a nice balance of Naruto's shenanigans mixed with the canon story, the comedy doesn't make you cringe even when they don't land for you, and the fights are good, if for no other reason than you describing things we've already seen in a way that gives proper spotlight to each party. All that to say that I like your story, and I'm sad to see it end, but it was a good run that deserves every bit of pride that you have for it (that includes the zetsu plotline, forget the people who send death threats over fan-fucking-fiction).

naruto give lucy the tale of the utterly gutsy shinobi book as inspiration for her future books and buy novels from her as first customer

yagaminguyen you've been spelling words wrong also you may want check the chapters before publishing story on fanfiction

i think natsu have see kurama behind naruto's eyes also yagaminguyen you do realize that lot of harem stories are rarely read by people

naruto is technically old man with appearance of 17 year old teen boy and i would rather prefer him to be mentor of team natsu than have harem of six girls

You remember the galuna island arc their demons and humans were very friendly and her you said that humans and demons can never get along what kind of crap is that