Reviews for Fifty Shades: Mafia Love
Rosiekin chapter 3 . 10/11/2015
Ana giving Taylor an order, now that's first!
Awesome story btw.
Rosiekin chapter 2 . 10/11/2015
That was so sweet!
Rosiekin chapter 1 . 10/11/2015
Pretty good! Same Ana and Christian, but a tiny bit rough around the edges!
Ehundl chapter 5 . 10/11/2015
I've really enjoyed this short story!
Nothing2CHere chapter 5 . 10/11/2015
Great story. Can't wait for your next one.
vamomoftwins chapter 5 . 10/11/2015
Omg loved it! You should do another Mafia story as this was really good!
Guest chapter 5 . 10/11/2015
Your English confuses me. Please consider using commas and full-stops when constructing your sentences; they are also applicable when writing dialogue. For example; "I love you, Ana." or "I love you too, Christian. I always have, and I always will." You've shown a lot of improvement in your grammar, but there's still room for improvement. This is just an FYI review, you don't have to post if you don't want to. Thanks, and best of luck with your next fic, Lorna.
Guest chapter 5 . 10/10/2015
This was a great story!
Amelia Wick chapter 5 . 10/11/2015
Great Story! :-)
rgmoonstar33 chapter 5 . 10/10/2015
Love it! thank you
gabyhyatt chapter 5 . 10/10/2015
I love it, too bad that kate was bad
valentinesgenie chapter 5 . 10/10/2015
Yes a beautiful way to end a story see for your next story take care. ...
shan36 chapter 5 . 10/10/2015
Great ending to this story!
sbm2384 chapter 5 . 10/10/2015
I loved it! Christian and Elliot as bad boys! Gotta love those!. Sorry that Kate had to go all crazy but I'm glad Elliot found another women. Can't wait to read another of your amazing stories
SapphireBella chapter 5 . 10/10/2015
Well done! Love the twist !
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