Reviews for Capitol Intent |
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![]() ![]() ![]() oh, it is most definitely an interest :D I am so glad I found this work of art, and I eagerly await your return |
![]() ![]() Omg! How have I never read this before?! This is so cool. I wish my head knew about American politics but alas it seems to be a vast and complex world. Still, very much enjoying it and looking forward to the characters developing! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() THEY KISSED, TWICE! It was a clever nod to the ALW kisses. Also, Erik's little 'six to midnight' situation gave me a laugh. I think I wouldn't mind a little extra plot driven "intimacy" from them later on, I say add it! I hope you'll continue this story and can't wait for the next update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just finished re-reading your wonderful story and it was a kind of homecoming. Thank you so much for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just wanted to tell you that I am re-reading once again. Thinking of the recent tragic event (they're in my prayers) your story gives me comfort and hope by reading about a world where actual action is undertaken to prevent this from happening again. Thank you for writing, truly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Waaaitt is it over?! What an abrupt ending if so I'm at the edge of my seat! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Plsss Plsss Plsssss Update this is amazing! |
![]() ![]() Love this story. Will you continue it? Can't wait to read how CE will come to termes with their feelings *Love is in the air * |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dear writer, A few seconds to review? You're overestimating our words per minute count, I think :p That being said, I'm intrigued! The story seems plot-heavy and you're building out their characters separately first, which I like. I haven't seen House of Cards and I don't live in a country with a president, so I might need to research things every once in a while, but I'm expecting to get used to this political lingo pretty fast. This is chapter 1 and there are already 41 chapters. No idea what's in store, but it'll be one hell of a ride, for sure! It isn't complete yet so good luck with that, bon courage and everything :) Sincerely |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG HOW DID I MISS THIS UPDATE. at last! yayayay can't wait for more. my vote is for the smut lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, consent! Just finished a unit called teen talk with my students and we discussed the importance of consent and how movies and shows don't get it and use the lack of consent to drive plots. Your writing makes me happy. Let's make this world better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am loving this. You returned to the unmasking and the talk I have been wanting them to have. I have enjoyed watching them fall in love. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter made me cry. You describe the lack of trust atmosphere due to injustice well. We must fight for equality and keep our word if we are to have trust. I like how your Christine is opening up Erik's eyes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's so true about social media. I started using my accounts more with the physical isolation. Zoom chats with my friends and students (13 year olds) about the pros and cons of social media were enlightening. How do we make more people aware of how focusing on our differences is not the best for the human race and we need to practice empathy and kindness. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have not seen House of Cards but I am enjoying your version. I like how you circle back to shared moments that connect them. |