Reviews for The Return
Agent Frank chapter 4 . 8/19/2016
I wasn't really happy with how all the females reacted to Naruto, it was a little too much. On the other hand so far I actually like Naruto's character. And I am happy with the summons you chose.
u0705990 chapter 3 . 7/11/2016
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u0705990 chapter 3 . 7/11/2016
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InfinityMask chapter 6 . 6/14/2016
Hmm.. I wonder how Hiruzen know that Toka like Hinata? I hope you would pairing Jiraiya with some one.. He is so pitiful... Lol
InfinityMask chapter 5 . 6/14/2016
Hmm... I wonder if Minato fight Naruto who would win? Btw will Toka be able to use Rikudo Sennin Mode in the future?
InfinityMask chapter 4 . 6/14/2016
Hmm.. How can Danzo helping Fugaku? I mean even though his methods is questionable, and make more enemies to Konoha, everything he do is for Konoha.. I'm sure he knows that Fugaku want to get revenge on Konoha so why he helping him?
InfinityMask chapter 2 . 6/14/2016
So... Oroci, Nagato, and Obito or Kabuto huh? I wonder if that means that Toka isn't a child of prophecy?
InfinityMask chapter 1 . 6/14/2016
... You know basically they need to populated Uzumaki and Senju right? How can Toka x Hinata populated both clans? I mean Naruto still alive, and possibly to have more child is big, but I doubt that the council and elder would alow "endangered" clans heir to be gay or is it lesbi?

Not to mention Toka is also possibly Namikaze clan heir too(I don't know if there are Namikaze clan in your fic so.. Yeah)
Oblivion196 chapter 9 . 5/1/2016
More more and more
sir2face chapter 9 . 4/11/2016
Good story so far. Just finished reading the the last chapter.
Axel Waxxel chapter 2 . 3/30/2016
trash belong to trash can..
bigfan22 chapter 9 . 3/15/2016
This fic was def a unique idea that I believe you pulled off well. No one was OP, and I like the backstory you gave to Naruto. Overall this story was a heck of a read, and I can't wait to see what happens with Itachi and Fugaku. Great job so far and I hope we get another update soon.
Xemenon chapter 9 . 2/15/2016
great chapter...
TheGentlemanRogue chapter 6 . 2/10/2016
So . . . Naruto's more or less being put into a CRA-approved harem (if you can call Naruto/Tsunade Mikoto a harem; I've always felt it takes three women to make a harem), but fem!Naruto is being paired with Hinata.

Makes perfect sense.
Warrof chapter 9 . 1/31/2016
Well then... That is actually quite terrifying.

Looking forward to future chapters!
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