|Reviews for Between Orcs And Men|
| Novek Dace chapter 1 . 12/29/2003
(in response to a mister "hm")
I'm actually rewriting this as we speak, bear with me.
I realised it was completely topsey turvey and didn't make sense a long time ago. As you can see it hasn't been touched for a LONG time. And do you realise how short it is? That would be because I gave up on it.
| hmmmmm chapter 2 . 12/28/2003
There's something I don't get. At the end of the ROC, Loarderon has been totally overrun by the Undead. Virtually everyone was killed or left for Kalimdore. How did the remainding humans manage to take back Loaderon just like that?
| J CAE chapter 2 . 1/11/2003
OOO nice! I'm kinda surprised cuz ur a girl rite? but u have this...male perspective. No fancy fancy girly stuff which sounds like warcraft.
| chomp91 chapter 2 . 1/10/2003
pretty good. the writing is good so far although perhaps making the chapters a little longer would be good.
so far, so good
| Sashimi chapter 2 . 1/4/2003
I'm really liking this story, it's coming along great. :D You might want to explain how the Orcs were given (or took) land of their own.
Are the humans fighting Thrall's orc clans or the still demonic "free" orcs?
Keep writing! :D
| Louiseifer chapter 1 . 1/2/2003
Hey, I'm not lying by saying you can write. You can. Muchly well. This is good and I want the next chapter. Now. I'm waiting.