Reviews for The Veiled Truth |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The first chapter is missing something about how, somehow, magic will recognize him as "Harry Potter" instead of "Kaiden Snape"; blood adoption or some other ritual, maybe? The ancient magics that find magic users all over England, and have done so since time immemorial, likely wouldn't be fooled by a 10-year-old glamour. ... I'm never a fan of the "Daddy Snape" stories, because they require so much manipulation of cannon in order to make any sense of them. ... for example, why would Snape tell Voldemort to kill children about to be born at the end of July if the birth date of his child were around that date?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() There is so much stuff packed into one year, I hope the trend doesn't follow with every other year like it did in the original story, or he might regret going to Hogwarts, lol. |
![]() ![]() Next time please don't make the REAL Harry Potter die:( Your OFFENDING J.K Rowling! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is still and will always be my favorite HP fanfic. Thank you so much for this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting combination, Bella and severus. But, I trust you. You havent let m down yet |
![]() ![]() Stubborn and caring elf and master |
![]() ![]() Wonderful thanks for creating will the parents let Kaiden fly/ play Wuidditch Will he be sorted into Slytherin? don’t think hate sorts based on genetics though the Weasleys are all Griffendors Malfoy Slytherin but the real Harry Potter was almost put on Slytherin until he begged not to be based on aversion to Malfoy and being told that was the house of dark wizardsIn short , hope you continue the story now that you’ve reunited the family and opened up the can of worms re disclosing the demise of Harry but then it seems you’ve already dispatched Voldy |
![]() ![]() So happy you wrote this : chance for Severus to heal and raise his son (likely alone since per Canon Bella is in Azkaban : though she may have been an escapee) Hope you do his sorting though: can he be a slytherin without the cunning/ambition? he hasn’t been raised as a Slytherin thus f |
![]() ![]() Wonderful complex setup Does Kaiden have the infamous scar? |
![]() ![]() Fabulous ( so happy you’ve reunited the Snapesand in a well-written story |
![]() ![]() Wonderful thanks for creating and sharing Happy for Snape (and Harry) |
![]() ![]() Fabulous thanks for creating and sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() really enjoyed this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kaiden, Severus, and Bellatrix Should Create a Potion with the Prince and Black Family Magics to cure Frank and Alice Longbottom |
![]() ![]() ![]() BWAHAHAHA Lockhart deserved it lol |