Reviews for A Rite of Passage
Guest chapter 1 . 8/14/2020
lucel18 chapter 1 . 5/20/2019
This is incredibly entertaining. Lolololololol! Thank you so much!
Hollow World chapter 1 . 6/25/2018
Too much ray of innocence I-I JUST CAN'T
bluepianos chapter 1 . 3/26/2018

"Zeno loves being around virgins" i swear to god zeno is the kind of old person i aim to be in the future.

the thing i take away from this is: education is so important lol

i don't know how i feel about the implication that yona, with a high education straight from royal tutors (im assuming), wouldn't have been taught about the bodily functions of women by the time she's, say, 14? 15? but i don't really know much about history anyway.

the most important thing is that this was cute, shin-ah's line "take care of your womb" WINS (everyone else can go home), and i hope hak and yona get to bang soon in the canon verse, the more fic i read the more i feel bad for the poor dude.
SakuraS41 chapter 1 . 1/3/2018
I love it! Especially your explanation through the court lady
AoHazuki chapter 1 . 7/25/2017
hahahaha XD LOL. This was a nice way of putting that rite of passage thing to womanhood. Nice work! :)
Smash41KMF chapter 1 . 6/13/2017
"Take care of your womb." Oh gosh, that's hilarious.
starfingers chapter 1 . 4/18/2017
That was wonderfully hilarious! I love it when fanfiction authors address puberty. Kinda hard to believe Jae-ha didn't know what's happening though, being the second oldest in the group. But that was well-written, thank you!
League Of Villains chapter 1 . 2/8/2017
Lolol great job! I laughed and smiled along with this story. I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing :)
Pufferie chapter 1 . 12/15/2016
Hahaha. The concept of this story is hilarious. And everyone's reactions were so in-character!

I loved this line:

But she was worse than naked; she was vulunerable, warm and sensual - each already dangerous on its own, but lethal to his senses when combined.

Poor Hak. How he suffers
CherCee chapter 1 . 9/22/2016
this is sooo funny xD
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8/2016
Poor Yona. But that was seriously funny. Zeno makes me laugh and they are all so naive about it that it made me laugh even harder!
uchihaitachiislife chapter 1 . 7/25/2016
I enjoyed it... a lot. thank you.
Bluebellindy chapter 1 . 4/21/2016
Wait... so Zeno in't a Virgin?! WHHHAAATTTTT?
Nightwing'snight chapter 1 . 4/6/2016
How did you even think of this! It's amazing!
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