Reviews for A Rite of Passage |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is incredibly entertaining. Lolololololol! Thank you so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Too much ray of innocence I-I JUST CAN'T ITS TOO CUTEEE |
![]() ![]() ![]() LMAO THIS IS HILARIOUS "Zeno loves being around virgins" i swear to god zeno is the kind of old person i aim to be in the future. the thing i take away from this is: education is so important lol i don't know how i feel about the implication that yona, with a high education straight from royal tutors (im assuming), wouldn't have been taught about the bodily functions of women by the time she's, say, 14? 15? but i don't really know much about history anyway. the most important thing is that this was cute, shin-ah's line "take care of your womb" WINS (everyone else can go home), and i hope hak and yona get to bang soon in the canon verse, the more fic i read the more i feel bad for the poor dude. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! Especially your explanation through the court lady |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahaha XD LOL. This was a nice way of putting that rite of passage thing to womanhood. Nice work! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Take care of your womb." Oh gosh, that's hilarious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was wonderfully hilarious! I love it when fanfiction authors address puberty. Kinda hard to believe Jae-ha didn't know what's happening though, being the second oldest in the group. But that was well-written, thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lolol great job! I laughed and smiled along with this story. I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha. The concept of this story is hilarious. And everyone's reactions were so in-character! I loved this line: But she was worse than naked; she was vulunerable, warm and sensual - each already dangerous on its own, but lethal to his senses when combined. Poor Hak. How he suffers |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is sooo funny xD |
![]() ![]() Poor Yona. But that was seriously funny. Zeno makes me laugh and they are all so naive about it that it made me laugh even harder! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed it... a lot. thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait... so Zeno in't a Virgin?! WHHHAAATTTTT? |
![]() ![]() ![]() How did you even think of this! It's amazing! |