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So is Naruto gonna be stepping up his training?

This a good fanfic
Just him joining fairy tail is starting to dull out

great chapter, keep up the great work

The one thing I absolutely hate about Fairy Tail is that they AREN'T ALLOWED to kill their enemies. Only knock them out. I'm sorry, but there are people in that world that don't need to live. At all. Yet the council forbids it. It's that kinda shit that can and does cause more suffering. With a handful if individuals, keeping them alive is okay, but the rest like Jose and others? There is zero excuse to keep them alive. Bandits are a perfect example.

I have to admit, I'm really disappointed. After all that, the epic entrance and everything...that's it? Seriously, I was so disappointed I just skipped the rest of the chapter. Fodder Naruto is Fodder.

trash made and written by a piece of filthy trash.

New record man. Tried reading this before.

Couldn't. Forced myself to read the last four chapters some time ago anyway. Did not read anything dull, but there was a lack of anything exceptional. I didn't quite remember why I never liked this story. Few months later see new chapter.

'Read' this recent chapter. Well I tried to anyway. Couldn't even get past the first few paragraphs. I suddenly remember why I disliked this story, along with your other ones.

Is it simply too hard for authors to try to write within the bounds of the source material? Must they add elements that are never witnessed, mentioned, or are not even a focus of the source material to begin with?

I seem to see every crossover with naruto be along the lines of edgy smut, with a slight focus on actual story element. Never any adventure, friendship, drama, any character journeys involving growth beyond ones desires or any actual external/internal conflicts that don't just revolve around romantic relationships which were, and still aren't the focus of the source materials that some authors seem incapable of comprehending.

The idea that a male and female character cannot just be friends is an idea so bizarre apparently that it can't be processed.

Well its fine I guess. Your stories are still 99 percent better than most of the garbage naruto crossovers that infest this site, so you have that I suppose.

Still never going to read them. Oh and you're free to say the "don't like don't read then" line soo many authors seem to spout all the time, and I can say that in order to learn whether you like something you try it and have the experience, so you can determine whether you like something or you don't, so if you dislike my comment, fine. But don't be a closed off bubble, or someone far more vicious than me will tear your stories a new one. Just process it, accept it, and move on. Its what I'm gonna do anyway, I don't like your stories, so I gotta just move on and keep searching for one I will like. If you wanna rip me one in your AN go for it. Hope you have better luck with more positive reviews, you'll definitely get them with this unoriginal work. It may be above average, it's still not anything special, but it is exactly the kind of work that draws reviews like FTDS trash does.

hope to read more.

I really enjoy Naruto's personality here. Hints of it are still recognizable from canon Naruto, but without all the attention seeking canon Naruto incorporated into his personality.

I can't wait for the next chapter. This story deserves a ton more reviews.

good chapter.

damn cliffhanger

Out of curiosity what's the pairing if there is none , I recommend naruerza ftw

Finally some new arc.
Great work

This keeps getting more and more intresting