|Reviews for Heatwave|
| myincoherentthoughts chapter 2 . 11/4/2015
This was so cute, I absolutely loved it x
| onyxcareles chapter 2 . 11/4/2015
Sigh... that was just a perfecting ending.
| anonymousW chapter 2 . 11/4/2015
God that was HOT!
Loved that chapter. Cant help imagining them on the boat wt kids.
Thanks for this
| kwisteria chapter 2 . 11/3/2015
LOVED IT SO MUCH. You covered everything I wanted (can't pick one cos there are too many)! And thank you for the sexy make out session ;)
Oh, I also really liked the ending that a few things are left to our imagination. It's so beautifully written! You really made my day, thank you :)
| Marina chapter 2 . 11/3/2015
Wow ! That was both very emotional and very sexy ;-) Loved it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2015
| kwisteria chapter 1 . 10/19/2015
Wow...this is a beautiful, beautiful love story! I could feel how much Harvey loves Donna and that made me cry. And What a cliffhanger! I'm dying for the next chapter already!
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/19/2015
love your insight into harvey
impatiently waiting for next chapter
| anonymousW chapter 1 . 10/19/2015
Maya. What. Is. This?
How dare you? I was supposed to have a productive day and now all I can think about is whats goin to happen next. Everything about it was brilliant.
Thanks for writing
| myincoherentthoughts chapter 1 . 10/18/2015
LOVE THIS, I cant wait for the next part x
| onyxcareles chapter 1 . 10/18/2015
Tears are falling. I'm sad for him, sad for them.
This is sooooo good. Please continue. Your writing is just beautiful. Especially when you tear at my heartstrings.
| Sof chapter 1 . 10/18/2015
Lovely! I like the twist with the dream...and i love the way u mix past and present!
| lafantomette chapter 1 . 10/18/2015
I can't believe I'm not even 40 and you killed me.
This is not only really hot but omfg so beautiful I'm just gonna go cry in the storage room...
| annnahatcher chapter 1 . 10/18/2015
I loved this so much! although I almost had a heartattack when she said "Mitchell" in Harveys dreams lol
I can totally see things happening like this in the show- where she is at the wedding with someone else and he is drinking and looking at her and gosh even reading this made me sad because its a realistic represenation of their feelings- so many there, shown so little.
cant wait for the update! xx
| deleted-abandoned chapter 1 . 10/18/2015
CLIFFHANGER? NOOOOOOO. I like the whole harbor/water analogy you got going on! I'm curious to find out where this goes :) I just have one critique, maybe break up the earlier paragraphs into smaller chunks. I found it difficult to read so much info in one clump.