|Reviews for As I Lay Me Down|
| applemysteries chapter 2 . 3/9/2010
This. Story. Is. Utter. Genius.
| Outlaw Jessie James chapter 14 . 1/15/2007
| timeends chapter 2 . 12/7/2006
Randy and Joan forever. lol.
| HuntingPeace chapter 4 . 4/1/2005
I am still loving it! You do need to check your spelling though. There are tons of small errors that I know you did not mean to make, they probably just happened when you were typing. One question: Why aren't they trying to figure out a way to get back home to their time? Just wondering. But it's going great!
| HuntingPeace chapter 2 . 3/31/2005
I am loving it! But I would like some bit of background on the Cordy/Angel relationship. Maybe you have it in a further chapter and I have not gotten to it yet. If so... disregard that. If not... could you possibly say how they are together and such. And just to be helpful, it's correct. I don't know if you caught that spelling error or not but I just thought I would let you know. It's a great story!
| blackbeltchic chapter 16 . 2/16/2004
I liked it. Hate the fact that Angel and Buffy aren't together, and I was confused for awhile there, since I haven't read this in a long time, but that's my own faults.
I liked it. I like the name you gave Buffy's baby.
I hate the fact that Angel was with Cordelia. That pairing just freaks me out! But the story was good anyway!
I finally remembered what had gone on in the story, about the time they got sent back. And I liked the prologue. Not exactly origional, Connor, and Buffy's Baby stopping evil, but it's still a good idea!
And i'm starting to babble now, and the 'cleaning feaerie' is back to possess me again, and the washer and dryer need to be fed again...
| MDGB-FAN chapter 14 . 1/12/2004
hey cool story! hmm...for the name part i think i like: emily marie or hailee dawn or maybe trinity j. or in longer terms trinity joyce or maybe mixing the names? or m i like Dawn Lanelle...makes it sound i dunno, cool to me i guess. hehe, well good luck wit ur writing ((not that u really need it))...buh-bye!
| Pessimistic Romanticist chapter 15 . 12/12/2003
i cant wait till you update sucks being grounded parents canbe such a drag im adding this to my fave list i wonder if buffy will still be pregnant or if the baby will be already born
| Pessimistic Romanticist chapter 14 . 12/12/2003
either hailee or Zoe
| Pessimistic Romanticist chapter 13 . 12/12/2003
you could name her kassandra or molly or annie
| Pessimistic Romanticist chapter 5 . 12/11/2003
how is that possible vampires cant have kids unless there was some sort of thing that made that an exception
| Pessimistic Romanticist chapter 1 . 12/11/2003
this is intresting you know you could have seperated the chapters
| crzy4fun chapter 15 . 12/10/2003
Interested to see what happens next...but, I think you need a beta to make sure that the chapters are easier to read. Hope you update soon.
| EllieD chapter 14 . 12/9/2003
oh...i like hailee dawn...but i also think that emily elizabeth is cute!
| EllieD chapter 11 . 12/9/2003
me again...i see that you have changed the format of the story..very good...it looks so much better now! keep it up!