Reviews for Divorce and Other Courtship Rituals
dhamann7878 chapter 19 . 3/20/2022
liked this ending much better
tbirdstar chapter 19 . 8/14/2021
I preferred this ending to the original. Great story.
Ln chapter 19 . 6/17/2021
This here is the ending i wanted. I dont really like Ginny. Thank you for this.
christev chapter 19 . 2/25/2021
I absolutely loved this! I'm so glad you did an alternate ending to A Disarranged Marriage, so that Hermione and Marcus could find happiness together! As I said in my review of that fic, I really do enjoy the way you've written his character. I honestly think Hermione and Ron, as characterized in canon, would have ended in divorce, no matter what the epilogue had for them. The way you wrote Ron's hot-headedness and inconsistency rings true, as does Hermione's stubbornness and her goal-orientation. Also, I quite agree with the idea that Hermione would have found it very difficult to forgive him for walking out on her and Harry. But mostly, I just don't think they're a good match.

Does your Ron fit canon perfectly? Dunno, but certainly it's a believable version of him. We can't ask the same question for Marcus, since canon just doesn't delve into his personality, keeping him a caricature 'evil Slytherin.' Your Marcus has depth, personality, motivation. And matching Harry with Millie is just the cherry on top - I love stories that pair the two of them!

Thanks again for sharing your gift of writing. I'm having a lovely time binging your works!
Guest chapter 19 . 1/3/2021
Now this is the ending I was expecting! Justice for Hermione! And more importantly, a conviction for the jill
HD chapter 19 . 9/4/2020
Have read so many of your stories this past week while dealing with a generally miserable week. I have learned new words. Happily. Thank you for sharing your skill!
Samwise Pevensie chapter 19 . 8/25/2020
MUCH better ending!
Lora chapter 19 . 8/22/2020
I know I've read this story before and while the prior story ending with the Hermione/Ron pairing is good, I like this one better. It is still enjoyable to me after all this time though I would love to read a Harry/Hermione pairing story if you wrote one.
Zaxarus chapter 14 . 6/26/2020
I think I've never seen someone use the word "insouciance" beforehand.
Really like your stories but they remind me a tad too much of the huge gap between my own school english and the "natural" vocabulary of an (educated) native-speaker.
Please continue the good work.
slytherinxbadxgirl chapter 19 . 5/8/2020
I just love this.
JeniNeji chapter 19 . 4/20/2020
So beautiful! I like this sequel. This is my first Hermione/Flint ever and the quality is very high. I hope you are ok and lots of good vibes.
PoeFan93 chapter 19 . 4/7/2020
defiantly a better ending.
renowned-warrior chapter 19 . 3/15/2020
Adorable... Oh my God, so adorable!
Minerva394 chapter 19 . 2/11/2020
What a lovely story, thank you!
littl30wl chapter 18 . 2/4/2020
This story is like comfort food to me; I return whenever I need a pick me up. Still one of my favorites in the fandom. Thank you for sharing. Wouldn't let me comment on the last chapter; guess I've already done that!
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