what you have is not an harem , you should change that an harem is 1 girl or boy dating a group of girls/boys , what you have is more of a polygamy relationship where those all in the grp are inlovve or sexual attracted to all the others ...u fucked me over when i tought this was luffy vs the girls in the grp , when nami start feelingup vivi that just turnd me off something fierce , nothing against gay people just dont like to read about it even girls on girls action , so please change the harem tag to polygamy or something instead so people like me dont have to stumble upon a good story just to have this slammed in our face and ruin it :'D ... your a super author love ur story but this kinda ruind it for me xD hope for the best for your story !

no lemons ... im dissepointed :( it gets an 8/10 if u had given us some smexy lime it vould have been an 10 ;'D

theories
the surviving Baroque Works members will join other crews (Galdino joins Buggy early)
Chaka, Wapol and Onigumos Devil Fruits will reincarnate in Nami's tree
Sanji will get a Cybernetic eye and deal with family earlier
Hina, Tashigi, and their allies will be involved in Skypia
Kizaru's much nicer (he regrets killing Smoker)
Enies Lobby will get an overhaul

The logia defence has 2 parts invulnerability and intangibility and while the intangibility is an active skill the invulnerability is a pasive one which means that as long as the attack doesnt have armament haki it wont damage them the best they could do is blow the logia’s body appart into the element they ar made of .

Awesome chapter .

Great chapter .

I like that in this story, the marines are a dynamic threat and not just a reactionary set piece.

FAv check!

Love the story and can't wait for future chapters!

Damn!
That is the expression that completely encapsulates what I am feeling after reading the latest chapter.
I had an inkling that you would be making some important changes in the story with how you had made Luffy very powerful and added some characters to the crew early or changed their allegainces from cannon but never expected you to kill Smoker and give his fruit to a disillusoned from Marines Tashigi. Still, I could understand your reasoning as Smoker became a joke after the time-skip. Maybe this will actually lead to Tashigi becoming powerful and joining the Straw Hats.
Cobra getting the Sand-Sand fruit and the Alabastian army getting trained in Haki as well as Six Powers will make Alabasta very strong in the long run and a good ally for Straw Hats down the line. It maye even save Cobra from the Elders when the moment comes and they turn on him.
Another interesting development, is Luffy getting to know early the location of Pluton in Wano. This may mean he will be read to face Kaido.
Straw Hats themselves got a very strong reality check. After, beating some no name pirates and a lazy Crocodile they may have felt that nothing can stop them but the fight with the Vice-Admirals showed them that they are very low on the food chain when it comes to the Grand Line. Sanji lost his eye, Zoro his trusty sword and also got an additional scar andNami and Luffy both almost died by drowing. Hopefully, this will make them train even harder and it will mean less heart-ache when they go to Sabaody and Marineford.
Looking forward to read more especially about the aftermath of this crazy chapter.
Thanks for the chapters!

Honestly, I'm more mad about you destroying Yubashiri than I am about you killing Smoker.

Oh no Smokey

Nice. First we get the message to the nation from Cobra, who quells any and all remaining doubt, exposing Crocodile and celebrating their heroes. We also see Luffy acknowledge that this fight took a lot out of him, given how hard he had to push is devil fruit. I'm beginning to see what you mean by him only having good control, especially when comparing him to other Logia users in series. Luffy needs to be completely isolated so he can practice with that fruit of his.

Moving on, Robin now becomes a member of the harem and she learns that Pluton is located in Kaido's territory. Not going there...yet, but definitely off limits.

Cobar gets to eat the Sand Sand devil fruits and his army is getting trained in six powers and Haki. Alabaster is about to get a serious overhaul...provided the world nobles and celestial dragons' don't get itchy trigger fingers...or Imu doesn't.

Next we have Vivi, of her own free will, joining the Straw Hats. Welcome to the see of adventures kid! A nice change of pace.

Moving on, we see that the effect of killing Crocodile has caused vice admirals to go after the Straw Hats, a hard fight that ended with victory and two vice admirals dead, but Sanji loses and eye, and Zero gets a nice new scar to now with the one Mihawk gave him. The Straw Hats may be stronger, but they are not top tier just yet. It will take more time and effort.

Chopper you are going to be working overtime.

Finally, the killing of smoker was not expected. However, given he mainly to beaten like a bad joke in canon, and in this story even worse it makes sense that the navy would want to cover up their failure or in action. Of course, that is if Big News Morgan, doesn't print the full truth, simply because he finds I more entertaining then their lie. Now Hina and Tashigi are on the run, the latter now having Smoker's devil fruit. Honestly, I think she could do a lot with this if she practices and puts more creative juices into it then Smoker did.

I just realized, with Logue Town taken over...was that by Bartolomeo? Considering that this when he became the biggest Luffy fanboy, it makes sense.

Next up, we have the arc you've said you're not looking forward too. Skypiea.

For this arc, one thing would be if during the Bellamy simply tanks Bellamy's Spring Hopper attack, or catches it mid air before punching him out, or when he gets close winds up using conquerors haki to knock him out without touch him. which would be more humiliating? and which would make Doflamingo angrier?

As for the time in the sky, I have to agree with another reviewer. Vivi needs a better weapon. I would suggest an iron cloud she can manipulate and shape, and use an impact and axe dial hidden in a pair of fans or something like that.

For Usopp, I hope he still gets that impact dial, his strength has gone up considerably he should be able to withstand it more. I would also recommend him getting a ball dial. He could create cloud platforms to escape, or hide stuff in. I wonder, could those actually be used as a cushion in a impact dial glove, diffusing some of the backlash?

Excelent

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