Reviews for Crumbling
Commander chapter 1 . 11/19/2021
This was an amazing story. The nightmare was appropriately terrifying, but not in an over-the-top, in-your-face way... it was the initial feeling of "wrongness" Fluttershy had and how everything kept escalating in small steps that made it truly feel like a dream, yet in a way that the dreamer isn't quite aware of yet. And as it built to the point when Discord was completely broken I nearly screamed along with her. Thank goodness it was only a dream! I loved the ending, too, showing how much each one treasures the other. This is a definite fave! Thanks for sharing it with us. :)
cute honey chapter 1 . 11/16/2018
awwwwwwwww cute a mlp fluttershy sneeze story please and well done
Lady Shadow92 chapter 1 . 7/25/2018
So sad glad it was all a dream wonderful story
Guest chapter 1 . 5/15/2017
Gave me some tears. The kind that are both happy and sad
Vamptoria chapter 1 . 6/3/2016
please continue. very good start.
Fluttershy Discord Metallica chapter 1 . 5/26/2016
Aw. Such a romantic horror story
GodlyJewel chapter 1 . 5/9/2016
Oh, poor thing! That was a nasty nightmare, but cuddles are a perfect fix.
BlueNuffinPegasister chapter 1 . 12/13/2015
yes! I loved this. Now one of the best Flutercord fanfics I have ever read!
Animekitty47 chapter 1 . 10/21/2015
Awwww, such sweetness!
WolfGirl214 chapter 1 . 10/21/2015
D'awwww! So cute! The feels are strong with this one. Great work!