This was an amazing story. The nightmare was appropriately terrifying, but not in an over-the-top, in-your-face way... it was the initial feeling of "wrongness" Fluttershy had and how everything kept escalating in small steps that made it truly feel like a dream, yet in a way that the dreamer isn't quite aware of yet. And as it built to the point when Discord was completely broken I nearly screamed along with her. Thank goodness it was only a dream! I loved the ending, too, showing how much each one treasures the other. This is a definite fave! Thanks for sharing it with us. :)

awwwwwwwww cute a mlp fluttershy sneeze story please and well done

So sad glad it was all a dream wonderful story

Gave me some tears. The kind that are both happy and sad

please continue. very good start.

Aw. Such a romantic horror story

Oh, poor thing! That was a nasty nightmare, but cuddles are a perfect fix.

yes! I loved this. Now one of the best Flutercord fanfics I have ever read!

Awwww, such sweetness!

D'awwww! So cute! The feels are strong with this one. Great work!