Reviews for Life At Birds Eye View
Sage S. Adoren chapter 2 . 9/14/2016
YAAAAAAAAY! Still here btw!
katmar1994 chapter 1 . 4/24/2016
I love it already! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Bink1999 chapter 1 . 10/24/2015
Nice rewrite. :D
TheSpriteOfJayum chapter 1 . 10/22/2015
Yayayayayayays! It's here! Excellent first chapter, which is NOT rubbish at all. Can't wait for chapter 2!
Wordmangler chapter 1 . 10/22/2015
Good luck with your third attempt at the story. I think there are some improvements over the previous version, but there are also a few things a spellchecker would have caught - "lazer" for example. There's also missing apostrophes and commas, that sort of thing. Also, if she's teaching in NYC, would she really be teaching a GCSE class? GCSE is a UK thing, isn't it? That's the sort of cultural thing you need to keep an eye on when writing a story set in a different country.

Anyway, glad things seem better for you, and I hope the third time's the charm...