Reviews for If Looks Could Kill |
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Wrixel chapter 1 . 9/17 Nice well-paced story. Thank you. |
dianaanne chapter 1 . 9/4 So what happens to the young basilisks? Did I miss something? |
Kimberly T chapter 1 . 7/20 Brilliant, almost all of it! The only bit I'd quibble with is about how Harry was able to create Portkeys to Malfoy Manor, since he'd never been there before... But he could probably have gotten all the necessary information by ordering Kreacher to think hard about where Malfoy Manor is located and what each major room in the manor looks like, and then using Legilimency on the house-elf. |
Zannna chapter 1 . 6/13 Bravo! How satisfying to see a Smart!Competent! Harry Potter! Well done! I enjoyed that very, very much! Thank you so much for sharing this with the rest of us! |
Mike Mattingly chapter 1 . 4/19 Wonderful story! I really enjoyed reading an original take on Harry being more dark then in canon. |
Books85 chapter 1 . 2/25 My, my! This is indeed a very Slytherin Harry. I have read too many Harry Potter fics lately, and find myself wondering after reading yours, "Wonder if Harry would win the war and then lose the peace?" I think this Harry can possibly become a good politician*, so maybe? Thank you I appreciate your work here! * good politician may be an oxymoron. Look at the world today. Humph. |
utahowner chapter 1 . 1/13 Fantastic syory |
hater chapter 1 . 11/13/2023 your writing is soooo cringe i cant even :( |
Keronshara chapter 1 . 7/30/2023 The only thing more dangerous than an army of basilisks is a large group of adult mandrakes with a Sonorous Charm on them. You could probably kill (use instead immature mandrakes as a nonlethal option) the entirety of Hogwarts' staff, students, pets, elves, & forest-occupants no matter where they might be in the castle or surrounding lands, let alone the occupants of any manor, building, or village you might attack, with only those deaf or happened to be wearing soundproofed headphones/earmuffs suffering no effects. |
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 1 . 6/18/2023 enjoyed it |
mumphie chapter 1 . 5/4/2023 An interesting and different story. I do wonder what happened to the two dozen loyal snakes? |
maiqsmail chapter 1 . 4/23/2023 Beautiful, short and witty while exploiting existing plotholes. Very well done. I must admit I have a soft spot for rational powerful and morally grey Harry who doesn't bend under Dumbdumb. |
starie78 chapter 1 . 4/19/2023 Great story, a pleasure to read. |
IamNOTawriter chapter 1 . 4/4/2023 Thank you for a delightful story. You present a unique method of winning the war at low risk to Harry. I believe that this is one of the few that I've read where there is a plausible method for Harry to almost singlehandedly win the war without making him a grossly overpowered super wizard. On top of that, the writing flows well. It isn't marred by poor spelling or, misuse of homonyms. Thanks again. |
RightWrong chapter 1 . 3/14/2023 Very enjoyable! |