Reviews for If Looks Could Kill
falsepermanence chapter 1 . 11/29/2018
i did like this fic, i loved harry not taking anyone's bullshit. i just think think it wasn't as great as it could be. it was very list-like, just telling us event after event in sequential order rather than showing us with actual description and emotion in prose. it felt more like an outline to a longer fic rather than a fully fledged one shot on it's own. id love to see what this could be.
Sungazing chapter 1 . 11/28/2018
Cool story. It was an enjoyable read.
David305 chapter 1 . 11/27/2018
Well done!
Sircus chapter 1 . 11/25/2018
This is a great story reminding me that I still lack common sense. Thx for sharing.
Tanya von Degurechaff chapter 1 . 11/21/2018
did he keep basilisks in chamber of secrets?
lol, an Army or giant snake with killing stare and deadliest poison
Jimbocous chapter 1 . 11/20/2018
Nicely done, and a clever premise. Wonder where all the Basilisks ended up?
Thanks for a great read, and I do hope we can look forward to more from you in the future!
Its-Me-Kiwi chapter 1 . 11/6/2018
Wait, so your telling me that all that cool as stuff was just a dream...
I have one word.
Why...
ak chapter 1 . 11/5/2018
bonne fic!
gjustin035 chapter 1 . 11/4/2018
short but very good story thank you for writing it
Bellator93 chapter 1 . 11/3/2018
That was fun.
Montara chapter 1 . 10/31/2018
A very pragmatic Harry. I wonder what he'll do with all those basilisks since he doesn't need them for battle anymore?
Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2018
Delores - Dolores

giving them a favor - doing them a favor
Ibskib chapter 1 . 10/21/2018
It was entertaining enough, but way too much telling instead of showing in the early part, such as when Harry is thinking about how he's growing fond of the basilisks and is enjoying caring for them, and describes their personalities a bit and actually expressing a desire to keep them safe.

But when that is being summed up you don't show him actually interacting with the basilisks through action and dialogue, to make it come true for the reader, instead it feel more like a summary than a story.

basically, show don't tell.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2018
knew how exactly powerful they were - knew exactly how powerful they were
Latarra chapter 1 . 10/19/2018
Excellent story. :D
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