Reviews for If Looks Could Kill |
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falsepermanence chapter 1 . 11/29/2018 i did like this fic, i loved harry not taking anyone's bullshit. i just think think it wasn't as great as it could be. it was very list-like, just telling us event after event in sequential order rather than showing us with actual description and emotion in prose. it felt more like an outline to a longer fic rather than a fully fledged one shot on it's own. id love to see what this could be. |
Sungazing chapter 1 . 11/28/2018 Cool story. It was an enjoyable read. |
David305 chapter 1 . 11/27/2018 Well done! |
Sircus chapter 1 . 11/25/2018 This is a great story reminding me that I still lack common sense. Thx for sharing. |
Tanya von Degurechaff chapter 1 . 11/21/2018 did he keep basilisks in chamber of secrets? lol, an Army or giant snake with killing stare and deadliest poison |
Jimbocous chapter 1 . 11/20/2018 Nicely done, and a clever premise. Wonder where all the Basilisks ended up? Thanks for a great read, and I do hope we can look forward to more from you in the future! |
Its-Me-Kiwi chapter 1 . 11/6/2018 Wait, so your telling me that all that cool as stuff was just a dream... I have one word. Why... |
ak chapter 1 . 11/5/2018 bonne fic! |
gjustin035 chapter 1 . 11/4/2018 short but very good story thank you for writing it |
Bellator93 chapter 1 . 11/3/2018 That was fun. |
Montara chapter 1 . 10/31/2018 A very pragmatic Harry. I wonder what he'll do with all those basilisks since he doesn't need them for battle anymore? |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2018 Delores - Dolores giving them a favor - doing them a favor |
Ibskib chapter 1 . 10/21/2018 It was entertaining enough, but way too much telling instead of showing in the early part, such as when Harry is thinking about how he's growing fond of the basilisks and is enjoying caring for them, and describes their personalities a bit and actually expressing a desire to keep them safe. But when that is being summed up you don't show him actually interacting with the basilisks through action and dialogue, to make it come true for the reader, instead it feel more like a summary than a story. basically, show don't tell. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2018 knew how exactly powerful they were - knew exactly how powerful they were |
Latarra chapter 1 . 10/19/2018 Excellent story. :D |