|Reviews for Watching Her Fall|
| marysix chapter 36 . 11/9/2017
This story was quite a ride! I’m not kidding when I say the early chapters kept me up and i wasn’t sure what was going to happen, or what i wanted to happen. But it worked out well and it was very enjoyable. Thanks for sharing!
| MsLiss chapter 36 . 7/26/2017
| MsLiss chapter 7 . 7/25/2017
Twisted and dangerous
| MsLiss chapter 1 . 7/25/2017
You sleazy little git
| parkesy23 chapter 14 . 7/13/2017
Wow. Just love it
| Cardamoms3 chapter 36 . 4/2/2017
This story has everything - plot, character development, and a crazy amount of sexy energy. I can't wait to delve into whatever else you've written.
| left in bits chapter 15 . 2/4/2017
"Jacob, you're so young." You're only ""supposedly"" two years older than him Edward please come off it. I can't.
| left in bits chapter 7 . 2/4/2017
I'm trying to read this but as a 28 year old I'm so so confused why they sound so much older than you've claimed them to be? No 28 year old this days doesn't trim or at least know what it is, please. I feel like you should've made E&B in their thirties...and late thirties at that. This age thing is bothering me and taking me out of the story completely. Out of everything it's what's most unrealistic.
| elodia123 chapter 2 . 12/21/2016
Thoroughly enjoying the first two chapters, even though I am not a fan of Bella and Jacob getting together! I am a die-hard Edward and Bella fan.
| TwiFanfictionRecs chapter 1 . 7/3/2016
Watching Her Fall has been nominated in the poll to find the Top 10 fics completed in June at www . twifanfictionrecs . com
| Felicia123 chapter 36 . 6/23/2016
I just read this entire story over the last 4 days. I have to say that I loved your writing style and the places you took these characters.
I believe you stayed true to yourself and the integrity of this story. I commend you for that. Everyone has an opinion. It's true. My opinion is that this story was amazing. I loved all the twists and turns. I loved the real life issues these characters faced. I loved that Jacob Edward and Bella all got their HEA.
Please continue to write. You are talented. Thank you so much for sharing your story with the world.
| Czar on Lyfe Conflicts chapter 20 . 6/11/2016
| Scoobylover68 chapter 36 . 6/4/2016
A rollercoaster indeed! Thank you for such an entertaining well written story. I have a confession...I've never read nor seen Twilight so my observations were made entirely on what was presented to me so my thoughts/views changed constantly as characters developed. Loved it LL. I look forward to reading more of your stories xXx
| Guest chapter 36 . 6/1/2016
Great chapter. I loved how your story progressed and how it ended. I will look forwRd to something new!
| frostedglaze chapter 36 . 6/1/2016
I loved the ending, and am so relieved that Bella and Edward are together again. This was such a fantastic emotional story...though I hate that Mike and Jessica got away with no jail time, and no punishment. I really wanted to seem them go down. And darling Jasper deserved better than Alice.