|Reviews for Natsu's Lost Bet|
| 123Toby chapter 1 . 12/28/2015
this is just amazing
| person2238 chapter 1 . 11/23/2015
where exactly was the "egg" and what did the "toy"?
| Bagheera chapter 1 . 10/28/2015
Woah c'est chaud ! Et si bien écrit ** J'adore ;)
Perverse comme je suis, ce petit one-shot m'a beaucoup plu 3
Bravo ! Et merci :p
| Jambob1998 chapter 1 . 10/25/2015
That was awesome - can we get a follow uuuuuuup?
| cristallina chapter 1 . 10/22/2015
this was just wow!
the way you described Natsu's made almost sent me to the hospital from the lack of blood!
and how you subtly made it so the readers can discover that they're lovers is a just great! you didn't make them say it and you haven't mentioned it at all! but the way you made them act, describe and talk to each other was plenty enough for us to know that hey! they're in a relationship :D
as for the smutty scenes...that was just well done I liked how you went to describe their emotions during their intercourse and even thought Natsu's the uke, you still haven't made him less of a dominant! so it was perfect :)
one thing though, I would have found it funny to see how the girls would react to whatever lemony~ things happened as a result from their handy-work :p
all in all, it was just great and I was squirming most of the time from the excitement *grin*