i was right wverhtning falling apart and everyone is in the shit now. wonder how theyll all handle it

i have the feeling this stoey is about to fall apart

yooo suko is hilarious

that Lawful Stag abandon his brother his family didn't even tell his brother of what they found a coward how can you want that to be your king when he is known to abandon his family

I sadly read through and caught up on the story. It's a very addicting read and I love how much it fleshes out the world itself.

Wenn Sie kein großer Stark Fan sind warum verlieren dann nicht mal die Starks statt immer die Lannisters?

Klasse immer noch dafür das Jon König wird und Dany stirbt.

Valyrian steel was not been invented by the time of the 13th lord commander of the nights watch. It wll be thousands of years later that Valyria would be founded.

The writings not bad but so far I'm hating your main character. Guys an idiot.

damn everything went up in flames ! Varys got what he deserved ! But i havent understood everything, where was the wildfire ? It had been moved i guess but by whom ? Varys himself ? Then why burn aegon and everyone ? By Cercei and the lannisters who set alight everything after the city was taken ? Wonder what us gonna happen. Anyway your story s interesting and i like the parts with the emperors kinf of Yi tish style there are few fanfic about that. And indeed you deserve more reviews but most people read but do not care torewardthe autor even with some words kind of selfish but i think it is for every fanfic the same

Good to see you again.
Don't take the lack of reviews badly. It could be partly because lots of people read FF from mobile now. Cloudflare makes it near impossible for me to open the stories on PC, so I read FF content on mobile now.
And it's a bit harder, longer to write a review on mobile, so it could be the reason why you get so few sometimes.
At least that's MY reason why I don't write any nowadays.
But now I made an exception for you ;)

I’m curious, did you combine this story with your other story about the Starks? I’m leaning toward no, as I think Brandon ice eyes would’ve had a much bigger influence on the history of the Starks in general. Still the concept of him being here is interesting.

And this is why I fucking hated Lyanna Stark to the bones for doing that to the great Bobby B.

Interessant.

Just love the way you write love this and we are winter