Reviews for Slip Up
Guest chapter 23 . 8/3/2022
Where the rewrite?
Coolfire30 chapter 22 . 3/16/2022
I am screaming. Holy shit?!
I’ve cried and I’ve cried…ugh
Guest chapter 23 . 8/13/2021
I honestly believe a rewriting is unnecessary, for this story is already incredible as it is.
Guest chapter 17 . 8/13/2021
I cried reading this chapter… it’s not the first time I read this story, but it always makes me tear up… your writing is amazing.
Guest chapter 13 . 8/13/2021
Finally! I have been waiting for this moment since the beginning. I wanted them to see the parallels… that the Arcobaleno are no better than the Dursleys regarding their inhuman treatment (abuse/torture/conditioning) of Skull. They can’t hate the Dursleys without hating and punishing themselves, because in the end, the Arcobaleno acted exactly like Skull’s disgusting relatives.

Skull is too good… I would not be able to forgive them that fast and oh so easily. Abusive victims don’t do that in the real world… it take years of therapy and healing to even be able to look at the faces of their tormentors, if they can ever face them again. You made it all sound so easy… it’s unrealistic and a bit offensive.

Harry owes them nothing. Skull has every right to leave this abusive environment and go find his true family and heal. Would you force him to forgive and forget all the Dursleys did to him just because they’re blood? So why do the Arcobaleno get a kind of free pass offer 30 years of abuse and humiliation in the form of “conditioning”?

I never accepted the way Skull was treated in canon. Annoying kid or not, it was horrible the way his supposed fellow Arcobaleno treated him. Skull deserved better. Harry deserved better than this second abusive family. Abuse is still abuse, you can say it was training, or it was for his own good, but in the end it was degrading and thought him nothing, just how to fall into that sick victim/slave mentality. The conditioning worked way too well.

In order to finally heal, Skull must leave the abusive environment and its people behind.
aGnamZer0 chapter 23 . 7/18/2021
If you don't mind, can I ask you why you revamped it? This fic already became my favorite of the fandom. I see no need to change it. It's already incredible and it pains me that you stopped here, even if you plan to continue it under another form. I wonder if you'd be willing to take it up again.
aGnamZer0 chapter 22 . 7/18/2021
It must be disturbing for poor Reborn to obey the Skull he once dismissed as a useless civilian. But I believe, when he gets used to it, he will love it. Someone who can keep up with him isn't seen everyday after all. I wonder what information our mist dug out.
aGnamZer0 chapter 21 . 7/18/2021
If you don't mind, I will be honest. Yuni feels like the black sheep, the intruder, an extra. She looks exactly like what Skull was considered during three decades. And Skull is obviously a natural leader, a general, a boss. He is more of a Sky than Yuni, to a point I'm wondering if he won't suddenly awaken sky flames and take her place.
aGnamZer0 chapter 20 . 7/18/2021
If what Skull was doing the past few weeks was chaos, the thing that will hit the Neo Death Eaters and the British Wizarding World now is pandemonium.
aGnamZer0 chapter 19 . 7/18/2021
Must feel weird to see themselves being fooled from the perspective of the trickster.
aGnamZer0 chapter 18 . 7/18/2021
I understand better what Reborn meant a few chapters ago about how this was one of these moment in life where there is a clear Before and After. Skull is a lackey no more for them, he is a scarred warrior whom needs them to recover and go from surviving to living.
aGnamZer0 chapter 17 . 7/18/2021
Harry is really strong, his resolve is immovable. He truly deserves his title of hero, even though he hates it.
aGnamZer0 chapter 16 . 7/18/2021
The General. I'm so proud of Harry, but I'm even prouder of the students he taughts, his subordinates and of their unyielding loyalty.
aGnamZer0 chapter 15 . 7/18/2021
Oh, I like Hound. Usually, I'm not a big fan of OCs, but here I believe if he's still alive, the Arcobaleno will protect him as if he was their own.
aGnamZer0 chapter 14 . 7/18/2021
But isn't it the best when characters take control of the chapter and run away with it? It always leads to the best chapters I believe.
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