Cool story. The next chapters are on his Website. I just wish the authors would Update here.

Small but jarring issue. Macavity the "sooty post owl as gray as his namesake"

Macavity's a GINGER cat
He's called "The Hidden Claw"

Small but jarring

You write well. Very well. The characters just frustrate me.

Why are all of your characters stupid.

Why are your girls stupid when it matters? This is so well written that it is more frustrating

I love alex. Sad she was an idiot at the start but her dad WAS padfoot, it is expected.

Yep, no reason not to feed John to the Cerberus.

Here’s an idea — destroy the Horcruxes, kill John, destroy Voldie-wraith.

Promising start, but now feels like this is going to be a massive waste of time. Any reason why Harry has not destroyed the Horcruxes? Too busy building the future harem I guess…..

This is not a fic at all you don't know how to write a story, you just tossed a bunch of one shot worthless.

Interesting premise, but far too slow-paced for me. Thanks for writing, best of luck.

For those seeking more chapters. He has them posted on another website.
WWW DOT dpasw DOT com

NOOOOO WHY DIDN'T YOU FINISH THIS MASTERPIECE :(((
This was soooo good bro, I really wished you finished it. Funny how I got more attacked to virgo than the main character in the story tho. Thank you for the absoloutley legendary read :)

Read chapter 58 & 59 on the other website. Well done. Keep those updates coming.

For any of you looking to continue reading this story, LeadVonE moved it to its own website. You can find a link to it at LeadVonE .com . Unfortunately, it doesn’t look like he has updated it in several months, but there are at least 16 more chapters posted.