Reviews for Dodging Prison and Stealing Witches - Revenge is Best Served Raw
Darkgamer08 chapter 57 . 11/27/2021
I hope you update this story soon. Or the next part, whatever u plan to do
TheFire44 chapter 22 . 11/26/2021
I like the Quidditch rule changes. If there wasn’t a time limit of handling the Quaffle, the only reason to pass would be to get the Quaffle across the field quicker. I also agree that the snitch is way too OP in canon. Then again, it is pretty hard to capture aso it ought to be worth a lot. I also liked how Seekers can help move the Quaffle. But I was wondering, if Seekers could help play the Quaffle along, why shouldn’t Beaters be able to as well?
Darkgamer08 chapter 45 . 11/26/2021
Damnn. John falls for voldywonks. XD
Anon chapter 1 . 11/21/2021
So MC gets fucked hard twice and nothing comes of it.
Sparkling Ratemis chapter 57 . 11/23/2021
This story is incredible. It should be up on top of HP-fanfics with Methods of Rationality (which got me into Fanfics). The amount of worldbuilding and details, the huge story arc that never slows down or becomes boring or the finely crafted charactersI can't decide what I like best. It's such a masterful epic. Thank you so much for writing and I'm looking forward to the finale!
Barry chapter 57 . 11/20/2021
Okay, up to the newest chapter... what's annoying is that even if you updated tomorrow, I'd still have to wait like six months for the whole arc to be complete. La, such is life.

Gonna add this to my favourite list next time I log in. Good job, buggy as hell but original. What more could be asked of an author?
Figggle chapter 8 . 11/21/2021
Tried to read this story but 8 paragraphs in and they're still not at fucking Hogwarts, this is an excuse for you to type, not an actual story.
Barry chapter 53 . 11/19/2021
Gyah! I've just thought of something... If you're going with this whole harem idea-which, given the content description shouldn't be a surprise to like, anyone-it should not be FIVE witches... should be either four, or six-for the same reason as Riddle wanted a seven part soul. Now, I'm not saying you should necessarily add an extra one or anything, but the idea the society you outlined finding more than five to be "unseemly" seems unlikely. 51boy doesn't feel like where the limit would lie.

Dunno if this observation makes any sense. Whatever... back to reading the fic.
Barry chapter 51 . 11/18/2021
You know... the total number of people in the whole wide world who use the word "vomitorium" in its correct context, is now brought up to... two.

That's double!
Guest chapter 31 . 11/13/2021
Question: do gay people exist in this fic?
Barry chapter 35 . 11/12/2021
VD Malfoy?

Okay, let's game that out for a second... archaic term for STI... and Malfoy is cobbled together French... so...

Sexual illness transmitted in bad faith? Also, virgin... hahaha!
Barry chapter 25 . 11/6/2021
Patricia Pettigrew is Alex's biological mother?—Yeah, I broke and looked it up online—Acknowledged it's just a theory, but this one holds the most weight... she'd be in Azkaban for betrayal, and a sore spot for everyone involved. If true this gives quite a lot of conflicting character motivation, in story, for several different people.

Bravo, sir.
BonusAlexbday AN chapter 14 . 11/4/2021
That is a brilliant author note: seems like you spent an hour or so thinking about, "Why not use Gaunt Ring to assassinate Dumbleore?"

Very in character, and very reasonable in-universe rationale. Five by five for internal consistency. Great job sir.
vidushi.chandola chapter 57 . 11/1/2021
loved the story so far . please update
Sparkling Ratemis chapter 25 . 10/28/2021
I've just finished the audio book. This story is so awesome. It's amazing how well everything fits together. I really love the chapters going back and telling the passed semester from somebody elses POV.
It's the first book, in which I don't wonder "What is xyz doing while this happens?". Even the combat is written in such a way that this doesn't happen. It shows amazing abilities of the author and I'm really thinking about checking out his original works. But well, there are a few chapters of this left to read/listen to (Thank technology for text-to-speech). Thanks for this amazing epic!
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