Reviews for Dodging Prison and Stealing Witches - Revenge is Best Served Raw |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Just a wee bit of a hypercrite there huh boy? You sent Harry away to Azkaban knowing he was innocent, but you call him dark? |
![]() ![]() ![]() For something that wasn't supposed to be a threat, even I would have taken Dumbles' mention of Daphne bring in the incoming class as well as being possibly at risk as one. Old bastard can't help being a manipulative jerk even if he isn't trying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read the author's note and became very sadge |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story if you continue I'd just say at the start Harry had to wait to be 2 other lords. |
![]() ![]() way to many POVs in this story, but otherwise good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Daphne is a fucking moron of the highest order. I really hope she gets a good shouting for that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol Luna is quickly becoming best girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit lol Luna is insanely talented. In this fic, I dare say she's above Hermione. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know, I don't know why, but I'm starting to think Voldemort time-travelled somehow. I have no idea why but his behavior is so odd right now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lmao. Completely forgot that as Lord Slytherin, he can freely come and go to Hogwarts. Only thing now is to somehow make a clone of himself. Because when Harry is there, Lord Slytherin cannot and vice versa. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah actually, where the FUCK does Ollivander get all his Phoenix feathers? Shits baffling as fuck. I'm convinced that Ollivander is actually an SI, what with how much he knows. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is getting very interesting. Has a real sense of danger. Not everything is going Harry's way. It shows that despite planning, anything can go to shit, especially when ANOTHER time-traveller is involved. That means double the butterflies. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'll admit, a time-travel fic done this way is extremely interesting. Two time-travellers from different timelines working against each other. Oooh the intrigue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry done fucked up this chapter lol. But this raises some concerns for me. If Harry knows all that Voldemort does, it means this version of Dumbledore could annihilate Voldy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow lol. Not even claiming House Black or anything. We're going straight for Slytherin itself are we? Impressive boldness author. I can see the appeal of using one powerful house as a lordship rather than making the story cringe asf with multiple minor houses. |