Reviews for Dodging Prison and Stealing Witches - Revenge is Best Served Raw
Descew MiCrose chapter 2 . 10/26/2015
doing good please keep it up
EndlessChains chapter 2 . 10/26/2015
A well done chapter. Looks like Harry has goals in mind and notices his strengths and weaknesses. The adventure he went through to make a wand was well done. I have to say that getting a Yew branch was harder than it sounds with the one that Harry wanted first to be protected, which is understandable, to finding one in a graveyard that could possibly be older. Not to mention go across countries to get the other ingredient. It was quite the amusing adventure. I also liked how it was described with the way he was able to fend for himself by coming up with a plan to pick pocket as well as use the hotels for their services. Meeting the ghost was quite interesting. Thank you. Keep up the good work.
Charles Ceaser chapter 2 . 10/26/2015
Awesome chapter. Please update soon
ALPHAQ69 chapter 2 . 10/26/2015
Awesome... Like how he fashioned his own wand... Olivander face off was good
oghren chapter 2 . 10/25/2015
One of the most interesting time travel fics I've read so far. So please update soon and keep the great work.
vampwalker709 chapter 2 . 10/25/2015
Great story so far love the first two chapters and the idea

behind the plot looking forward to seeing him start this whole filling his

vaults conquest.
Herne-of-the-lantern chapter 2 . 10/25/2015
I like it. I hope you update soon.
tgcgoddess chapter 2 . 10/25/2015
I'm really enjoying this romp through time. I pray you, continue.
GreenAlien123 chapter 2 . 10/25/2015
Good stuff! Keep it up! :-)
roger9481 chapter 2 . 10/25/2015
I liked the little history lesson between the muggles and the magicals but I find the whole wand arc just unbelievable to a reader, I mean first harry trying to decide what to choose for a wand core when readers know that wizards can't choose their own cores because if that were true most gryffindors would choose dragons and slytherins would choose snakes and blah blah blah

second theirs more to making a wand then just getting a piece of wood and gluing the damn core because if that were true you wouldn't purebloods buying wands the same place mudbloods do if they can make it themselves

lastly just because harry is using the same core as the death stick doesn't mean it will be as powerful as the death stick since the original was created by death

all in all I rate this chapter 4/10 for all the wrong info
RobC chapter 2 . 10/25/2015
This is very good so far.
INQ8448 chapter 2 . 10/25/2015
Heheheheh. I wonder if he'll tell that his wand is muggle made... The fallout from that'd be hilarious :D Love the story.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/25/2015
Good update, and no mercy for the wicked.
saekdk chapter 2 . 10/25/2015
MOAAARR
Nocte Furorem chapter 2 . 10/25/2015
Another very good chapter.

His little "shopping trip" was very amusing. First, finding an appropriate yew tree not guarded by a protective wizard. Then, travelling halfway around the world to where there are thestrals not guarded by the wards of Hogwarts.

I like how he had a muggle craftsman make the wand. Even though he obliviated him, he was considerate enough to set some warning wards in case another wizard approached him.

The best thing of all is that he has a better connection with this wand than he ever did with his old one. Can't wait to see just what he does with it.
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