Reviews for Dodging Prison and Stealing Witches - Revenge is Best Served Raw
Krypton71 chapter 37 . 7/14/2022
Oh and you’ve used the private conversation slip-up again… It’s happened before and it’s pretty annoying given how cautious Harry appears to be.

Gilderoy Lockhart as headmaster?! That’s jokes! And the man is too ignorant to realise he’s entered a battlefield between 3 different political factions and lords lmao.

Glad he’s realised Virgo’s identity though. Sort of makes up for the conversation slip up from earlier I guess. At least information wise, both Harry and Voldy are level.
Krypton71 chapter 37 . 7/14/2022
The fact that Tom fkn Riddle is a girl and ‘thinkingnot really but…) that a Potter is cute is killing me lmao
Krypton71 chapter 33 . 7/13/2022
Huh isnt Tracey’s Lord, Lord Slytherin too?
Krypton71 chapter 32 . 7/13/2022
After that 5 chapter dry spell, these last few chapters have reinvigorated my passion to swipe for the next chapter! This is a great novel and chapters like the last 4-5 are exactly what I’m reading this for. I’d hope that chapters 22-27 (I think it was) would’ve just been condensed somehow into a Chapter or two, but that is just my personal opinion. They were good but I was losing interest while reading them. Glad I stuck around because the climax to this stone arc was brilliant!
AllHailThe99th chapter 8 . 7/12/2022
Why the fuck is Luna so moe, adorable, wholesome, adorable, intelligent, adorable, pretty, adorable, kind, and oh, did I forget to mention how adorable she is?! XD
Krypton71 chapter 27 . 7/12/2022
Tbh I just kind of felt annoyed reading the first 80% because it’s like… would Clare even remain relevant now that she’s helped with the “protector slytherin” and “duelling memories” plot points. It just felt like a waste reading it all. But I guess I’ll read on and see… though I doubt she’s important. The enthusiasm I had to begin the next chapter I had back in ch1-20 just wasn’t there for the last 5-6 chapters. Really hoping it picks back up…
Krypton71 chapter 16 . 7/11/2022
Can’t lie the sorting dumbledore conversation was jarring as heck
Igniferroque chapter 46 . 7/11/2022
Is the hag just trying to stir up trouble?

Can Harry share dreamscapes with anyone or just Ginny?

Emma refers to Harry as “My Lord.” Did he have his reveal with the Grangers off screen?

Shouldn’t every house on the expedition get a share of the treasure? I’m not suggesting an equal split; Harry should still get the lion’s share.
Krypton71 chapter 13 . 7/11/2022
Really enjoyed this side story! Also glad you didn’t plonk it right in between the plot. Thanks!
Igniferroque chapter 37 . 7/10/2022
Good show making Lockhart headmaster!
London Knight chapter 57 . 7/8/2022
Glad your STILL continuing on writing on Chapter 59 . SO MANY more jaw dropping moments ! And that last confrontation ... Oooooo ...
Igniferroque chapter 27 . 7/10/2022
You’ve done an excellent job of building upon the setting.
Igniferroque chapter 10 . 7/9/2022
Admittedly it has taken reading more than a hundred fanfics to think of this but why not just put the Alchemist’s Stone in a Fidelius warded box?
Igniferroque chapter 5 . 7/9/2022
Well done with the Slytherin intro speech.
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 9 . 7/7/2022
She should call Dumbledore out as a liar and The Older Potters and Albus out as accessory to child abuse. And twisted in morals and ethics.

And I find all of the marriage contracts and bride price bullshit disgusting it basically say females are nothing but property to be owned. And in some counties if not most modern nations have outlawed such practices but not all. And I remember reading a story a few years back that such practices are illegal in the UK. And that it is the Muslims that still practice this shit and they are getting in trouble in the UK for it. And I have heard in many other European Nations that they are also not tolerating these old practices.

Plus in this story The Goblins at least know not to go against the Higher Powers but to obey. Unlike the Wizards and Witches. And Albus is one such Wizard who has gone against the Higher Powers and foolishly manipulated the Potters to go against said Higher Powers. And they are going to pay dearly for it which also includes John Potter who is foolish and can't follow orders when given an order by a higher power to set things right the adults caused. And quite frankly Albus, Lily, James and Sirius need to be ripped a new one for what Harry went threw that he didn't have to. In fact that effing old goat needs to learn to pray to get t her answers for that the prophecy means and that is to be done to fulfill it not what he thinks is to happen. And because of his foolishness to many innocent lives were lost and the Wizarding world was screwed over and as a result it was going extinct and so Harry was sent back in time to set
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