I wish you would continue with this story, you did a fantastic job! For only a story that has over 150k words, you created such an in-depth, detailed world. I love how the plots came-to and the characters development.

While I understand stand your reasonings, I cant help but feel selfish for wanting you to continue this story! Like I said, you did fantastic but it is sad to see it not complete.

I wish you all the best and taker care! 9.5/10

and 4 the ending was feeling a bit rushed once Sayuri returned to Konoha and extra stuff was added in exchange making it feel superfluous.

HAH. She has arrived, swag mode.

Technically from her POV leaving would mean never getting to be with the one she cares for even if she promises which then defeats the whole purpose of everything.

Oh! Idk where people got that gai CANT use other jutsu skills. So much as he just doesn't if he can help it. I mean really the dude literally used Summoning jutsu in his first appearance. Gai's insistence for taijutsu is purely because of his father and achieving his father's dream. A dream he saw in Lee due to Lee being unable to use jutsu and passed it on to Lee.

I actually feel like team 9 is skipped bc of the Kyuubi. Kind of like how the number 4 is generally skipped over put of superstition for certain things since it's means death in some languages.

Ya lost me at the gender bent Sasuke, the fuck did that need to happen?

if Naruto gets into the CRA the he can choose sayuri to be one of his wives

Zabuza knows he's in a fanfic?

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did a twelve year old write this?

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The entire afterlife you've created clashes with the existing afterlife that's already been described in Naruto.

In other words, I absolutely hate it.