well a couple of issues with this. 1: fuinjutsu requires much more chakra control then most other applications for chakra.

2: hiruzen passed the law about, talking about the kyuubi. not anything about (demon) and that was done when he was 2 or 3 i think.

3: instead of giving naruto his end story power's, why didnt you just give him mokuton. it's widely believed mokuton is asura's chakra speciality, since noone else has awoken it besides people who infused themselves with hashirama's dna. obito madara tenzo.

4: starting at graduation day for this crap to happen is far to late to change sasukes path. if wore to awaken such much earlier and has a decent ranking in the academy that would have opened more option's.

5: sakura was only a fangirl for sasuke was cause he was a MALE and a uchiha. i could see her respecting her as a female, maybe having some fangirl's due to them swinging that way. but having the story pretty much the same with all the character's is pure lazyness on the author's part in not wanting to change anything.

Oh okay. Looking forward to it

Got it and thank and you becareful now ya hear.

Nice to know you are still safe and alive.

Eyy~! Hype time. :)

good luck

I hope you decide NOT to delete the original story. Despite its flaws, theres a reason people liked and followed it. Perhapse the rewrite will be better in every way, but theres value in this version too. Excited for the continuation of this story. Take care and I'll see you in the first chapter of A Tale of Two Transmigrants.

I have a few issues with this chapter, first The seal was used to block Kurama’s chakra, Naruto wasn’t using it so it shouldn’t have effected him. Second, he is fighting a sannin and doesn’t use 6 paths mode? You made the uchiha and the Sannin too close, he barely beat her, why would she go to him? That fight scene just created a lot of holes. Story over all I like, just this fight scene, not so much.

I like this story but I never realized how cringe that part with the genjutsu is. Kakashi's anger is completely justified, yet while it's understandable, Naruto's isn't, yet it's framed as if Kakashi was in the wrong and Naruto was right? Like dude, why tf are you mad at what YOU started? It's yo own damn fault you saw that happen, but even more so it was a genjutsu. Don't do bullshit if you can't handle that same bullshit thrown back at you give me a fucking break.

pls update

pls update

nice story I just wish you didn't let his inform the hokage even though he help naruto he still fuck up his life
* He could have atleast give him a better place to live
* The Shadow Clone technique

You left out the obliteration of anything it touches. Which is a pretty important part of Truth seeking orbs.

Sorry but I won't keep seeing this shit, I've always thought of Naruto as a fool, shippuden at least half a turn, but still, he was always an impulsive jerk and even in this story he's still a fire will. stupid when everyone hates it, how pathetic and delusional, it just disgusts me that stupid innocence that shouldn't even exist, Kishimoto if you're going to make an idiotic and dense protagonist unless it has a backstory, being the son of two legends and even even though her mother had her attitude it was not useless.

I know you were too brain dead to actually finish this, so me saying anything is futile, but you need to separate dialogue. Stop having everyone talk on one line, holy shit.