Reviews for Black and Blue |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I know this is late, but congrats on your baby. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully done. Almost sad it's over... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is by far one of my favorite fanfics I’ve ever read. I loved the mystery every chapter I was so excited for them to find out they’ve been writing each other this entire time! I also love how badass Levy is in this. I feel like she’s written as a really shy small girl too often I feel like she’s way more badass than the anime or manga shows. I also love how Gajeel is conflicted when he starts becoming interested in Levy because he’s still in love with “Blue” even though it’s the same girl Levy writes so differently than the way she speaks! This was a wonderful read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish there were more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a good read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like their banter and the way you incorporated the important aspects of canon to fit each scene. Gives it this complete feel to it. I don't entirely agree with your portrayal of Laxus here. Yes, he's a douchebag when first we meet him. And he isn't shy to pummel those weaker than him. However, I think you layered the self-righteous Superiority a but too thick. Anyways, nice cabin scene, that was truly memorable. You know that it's called the Tower of Heaven, right? Or have I been wrong this entire time? meh, guess we'll never know. Interesting plot, if he does see her at the festival then the jig is up. Unfortunately, like every good anime, the frustration of them never meeting each other in crucial moments is a common cliché that we love and hate. So, I doubt he would notice her even if he did attend. Besides that, isn't he about to infiltrate Ivan's Dark Guild? He won't make it to the festival in time. Unless he had a flying contraption... or a teleportation circle... or just left his mission early... anything can happen |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great idea for a mysterious pairing between a heavy metal artist and a bookworm. I think the exchange was sweet, with enough humour to keep things interesting and a nice approach to canon. Don't know if you noticed but you said "Guide" instead of Guild in the beginning. Not much on grammar and punctuation worth noting. However, a decent timeskip insertion would be nice, that way we can decipher when a new paragraph begins a completely different topic entirely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW this was just amazing truly so so so good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god! This is gold! I love the idea but am worried about the ft vs Phantom. *wrings hands* but the way they interact is just*chef kiss* mwa beautiful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Just wow. I’m sobbing. I’ve loved this story more than any Gajeel & Levy fanfic I’ve read...and I’ve read A LOT of them. Thank you for writing this - it’s a beautiful piece of work and you’ve managed to add a whole new hidden depth to my favourite anime of all time. Take care, stay safe and write more! Avid Fan |
![]() ![]() ![]() WAAAAAHHHH! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still loving the story. Big congrats on your baby news! I can’t work out how old he or she would be now |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jesus, my heart! I can’t take it - I love this story so much. I think you’ve written both characters extremely well and their interactions with each other feel genuine. My souls is crushed right now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely adore your story. It is beautiful, funny, sexy and devastatingly sad. I’m enjoying this read immensely! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly one of my favorite fanfic I read about Gajevy 3 the twists and turns got me squealing (when Gajeel discovered that Levy is Blue and when Lucy caught Gajeel)! i read it in one sitting and enjoyed it so much~ they're my OTP and you wrote them so well :3 Thank you for sharing this story I'll be reading your other stuff, for sure! |