Reviews for The Kyle Side |
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![]() ![]() pour quoi tu a changer la réplique de harry,qui traites la plannèt de marigot primitif et qui vas apeler l inpèratrice pour qu elle vienne avec un star destroyeur qui vas détrure la planète depuis l orbit |
![]() ![]() pour quoi kyle se fome pas a la magie |
![]() ![]() ![]() you wrote a great story my only complaint is that you had that alien romance budding and then tried to never mention it |
![]() ![]() pour mois l univer legend et les six premier film sont la vèritable histoire de star . a fiait du copier coller des premier film |
![]() ![]() Wow this is so interesting! And hopefully they killed some of the stronger death eaters so they won’t be bothering Harry for the near future like Snape and Malfoy lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() When Chuck Norris's name is Kyle...it will always be Chuck. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "He seriously doubted his life as a Jedi would benefit from having a knowledge of Earth-based potions"...So, even just the ability to not just repair but straight up regrow bones is a pass? Are you fucking kidding me? Nah, a Truth Serum never would have been useful. Ok. Gonna chalk this up to unreliable narrator at this point. Always the frustration reading an older finished work, there may be a method to madness outside of foolishness or laziness. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I loved the really immersive story, thanks for taking the time to write and share it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely story. I enjoyed it so much. |
![]() ![]() True a fun and excellent story. thank you. I enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh gosh that ending joke |
![]() ![]() ![]() just realized I had never mentioned it before, particularly when the "scientific/medical" explanations for magic were given, but I absolutely love your explanations for how Magic works/relates to the Force. Too often it's just handwoven as just one and the same (or same basis with one or the other, Magic or Force, being the True/better/best[?] way to utilize the power- which one being the better a matter of plot and author choice: be that Force coming into wizarding world/Magic as a more powerful ability/answer to the Prophecy "power he knows not", or where Magic is a more nuanced and varied application of the force) and only rarely is there a story where each aspect have distinct abilities and applications let alone where they are equitable to one another. Still this is the first time I have seen Magic not just woven off as "just the force, you primitive societies misunderstood it and called it magic that's allor the opposite where magic is superior to clumsy force abilities, though that focuses more on the most basic powers and abilities), and instead Magic is a genetic adaptation that some earth humans have developed to interact with the force much like other species have their own unique abilities drawing from/connected to the force- much like the example you gave of the one race and Psychometry. I just wanted to mention how much I appreciate that new, to me, perspective for the cross-over and that it in general opens up whole new approaches to Star Wars fanfic stories, both crossovers and not, in general. (After all one personal nugget/concept playing around my mind involves the Arkanians [I think that's the right species, it's been a while since I looked into the details for the idea] and their constant genetic modifications and experiments to create a "perfect" form/race/being: the idea being they, or a team/organization made of their numbers, create a hybrid/super soldier/etc and that creation has one successful subject that, despite the scientists not believing such, only is successful because the Force willed it be such- that subject being the "actual" chosen one if Anakin is still around [Sith creation/origin, I think that's at least implied in some source materials, possibly separate the two Prophecy of Balancer and Sith'ari to two individuals] or have said creation be the chosen one Instead of Anakin being born. As such a new look at how various races have unique Force-based/connected genetic/[sub]species-based abilities is a prime source for an Arkanian genetic experiment- particularly as cloning/designing actual force sensitivity is supposed to be incredibly challenging, and yet those force-based genetic abilities may be easier than actual force sensitivity [after all those entire races don't make for jedi, and I believe even the original Sith Race didn't have 100% force sensitivity in its population] and the subject having actual force sensitivity/abilities could be entirely unexpected and even a source/method of escape should the plot require. Also, I'll likely never write that story should you or anyone else trawling the comments wish to take it and run with it- I can come up with broad strokes outlines of stories/plot bunnies like that, but I don't have the writing skill to write an actual story from it, I just end up delving deeper into creating lore/world building/plot mechanics/etc that could support a story but I cannot for the life of me write the story itself) |
![]() ![]() ![]() huh, good to know there was at least a little more beyond the Vong stuff. I had been reading bits and pieces (a trilogy here, a standalone book there) about the Post-RotJ events until I found the "newat the time) direction of the books with the Vong. I hated that arc so much I lost all interest in the earlier works because I knew they'd just wind up leading to that crap. I am glad that there was an end to the Vong arc. Heck prior to learning this I hadn't realized there had been anything past it so I actually didn't mind the Disney cull on Canon simply because it meant no more Vong. (The Sequel movies seemed to start strong, I thought The Force Awakens was presenting a new/revised take on the old Legacy Imperial Remnant/New Republic with the whole First Order deal and the New Republic. And that the following movies would have Rey, and etc, bringing the two factions to an equilibrium/balance to complete the whole "balance to the force" deal. Yeah, I was way off.) The Only thing about the cull that really got to me before was Nixing all the Old Republic stuff (though once I learned more about some of the SWTOR mmo plot I could better understand that, it being an MMO of course goes a bit overboard |
![]() ![]() I live 30 km from Knott end-on-sea;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() If memory serves, Cedric is likely doing Cho Chang. |