Just realized Dumbledore didn't give him his family cloak.

Eh. Great that mist survived though that did suck. Pun definitely not intended but noticed as I typed it.

Very much confused why he didn't call for help. Dark Lord had a force that took out his master and some of the best Aurors. Yet he decides to wing it and continue in his own with not just the Dark Lord. Forces he's used. Forces he hasn't mustered yet. And a corrupt ministry ready to arrest him and blatantly aiding Snape and the rest who blatantly betrayed them all.

In this the ministry's corruption is over the top already since there's no freaking way Fudge should still be in charge, nor Lucius out of prison with the shit he pulled as things went in this story. If it happened later on with Voldy around and having made moves sure but none of that happened yet.

Could've done without Amelia dying. Surprised the mini Dark Lord could convince the vampires in that state. They know he thinks of them as disposable creatures. Yet aid him in such a state where he isn't a threat.

So Daphne became Malloy like to be a minor counter to Hermione that barely exists?

Not a bad story and glad Hermione is in it. Sad he hasn't noticed Luna at all and I get the feeling she won't even exist like many other stories.

Simple yet awesome way of handling Umbitch. She still needs to die though.

Sirius knows Dumbledore forced him as bait for Voldy. No freaking way Sirius would help Dumbledore anymore.

Magical Britain has masteries where you become an apprentice to your master of the subject.. it shouldn't be a foreign concept. Same with Sirius reaction being weird.

Lucius was linked to the death of Ginny and the Basilisk roaming with an object that brought back an incarnation of Voldy and yet Draco says his dad still has influence as though he's not in prison?

I call bs. Even with the ministry like it is he couldn't escape that unless he's on the run.

Harry's lack of reaction to Hermiones bag is weird. Imagine star ships with space expansion and other possible rune aid?

Just occurred to me. These amusing Kyle bits at the top of each chapter are likely former Chuck Norris jokes.

I find it hard to believe the stone would've been brought together school without Harry there. Those traps were blatantly NOT meant for Voldy. Hence the Troll shouldn't of been there to hurt her.

Disappointed the second year was also repeated and killed off Ginny. Heck I'm surprised Lucius wasn't amongst the attackers who was killed and hence no book given. Yet here we are with both Canon events forced.

Canon wise Ginny and him together was bs and annoyingly forced. As was him and Hermione not getting together.

Obnoxiously forcing the James and Lily clones together and forcing the opposites of Ron and Hermione together. Her falling for him over Harry in itself absurd without potions involved or just Author forced bs.

And sometime around now if canon plays out Luna loses her mom.

Interesting. Two things I'm not a fan of though. First the thought of being in a world of magic and being denied the ability to learn it hits a nerve I didnt know I had and bothers the fuck out of me. Frankly in most cases I'd choose HPverse magic over the Force.

Second is the stories that have some hero yet screw him out of getting the girl. Guy faces battles, risking his life and defeats the big bad guy or empire and the end. Sure maybe he has his pick of the litter afterward and has to figure it out with his hero status but thats a mess in itself and after the stories finished.

In this case he's screwing over people like Hermione, Luna, Neville, and more im sure. Dumbledore shouldn't pull crap like with the stone but Ginny very well could end up dying. Though even with that it really feels like it was Dumbledore letting it play out.

It potentially screws over Sirius as well actually.

Yeah I very seriously don't like this setup. Maybe if I didnt know Canon and that people would be screwed over by this. Though if I found out later it would still be sad.

Thank you again. That was fun.

the invicibility is a nice gimmick, but more fit for a naruto crossover or for an assassins. I don't quite get it why it is in harry's saber, he is in no way stealthy

Loved this