An interesting beginning. I hope you do make an actual story out of this :)

Brilliant start!

I enjoyed this chapter. I am finding it hard to find good stories that catch and hold your interest. Yours do this and I think I will miss your writing when you quit if you have just two stories left to publish. I look forward to see where you take this story.
gaschalk

Awesome start.

I just want to say, always been a fan of your stories, but this one... I'm really excited to read more.

The beta thing could maybe catch a couple typos here and there, but it can be betaed afterwards too. All in all it looks like a keeper.

Wow! This is amazing! You are amazing!

excellent start

very nice

As always compelling story. Look forward to more. Thanks
Tricia

Interesting. Not happy about 1 of last 2...but we all must move on...at least you finish your stories.

I like the concept. Looking forward to seeing what lies in store for this version of Harry.

This is pretty awesome so far. I'm not a huge fan of some of your work, but of the ones that I've enjoyed, I feel that this has the greatest potential, even if it's a bit premature to say such a thing.

I love it already.

THe only question I can think of is this: Anakin Solo was mentioned and it's clear thi is post Legacy of the Force. Question is can you say where in the EU timline (considering you have Kyle that means you have no love for Disney erasing EU)

Also, will youplease have Kyle fix Harry's vision? A Jedi that needs glasses is just not done.