I can see it now, this is going to be Fun! Albus just got Owned (along with all of the Order that were there), after all, Kyle didn't have to stop his foot just a fraction of an inch (or centimeter) from his nose, elsewise he would have been curb stomped in a major way, and there wouldn't have been anything he could have done about it. It will be fun to see if Harry will get any Magical education along the way. I will assume that there will be at least a series of time jumps, so to speak, before we get to the meat of the story, but knowing you, you will make it all the more interesting for us in the long run. Thank You. TTFN

If nothing else it's interesting. I'm not really sure what to think, but that's often the case with your stories. They tend to grow over time.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

An interesting start. Very curious that Dumbledore so easily gives in. But then I do think the Force being the same as Magic, our Jedi Master is far beyond Dumbledore. Bummer that, at least at this point, we aren't going to see Harry at Hogwarts.

Oh, yeah!
I've always been partial to stories about Harry being removed from the Dursleys, and now I see Darth Mars having a go at it!
Instant fave!

lol love they way you've written Kyle!

very well written sir, I rather like the direction you're taking this story.

Yep. Pretty much Kyle. Do I want to know what happened to Jan?

Ok ... I know this may not be what you're looking for in a review, but I like this. I'm partial to stories where these's some humour and some BAMF teaching Harry. Looking forward to seeing how DD and the rest adjust to no Harry.

I am so loving this story. Kyle is a very interesting person and I can't wait to see what happens to Harry.

Ah got my hope all up for this only to have to put it on the back burner. Awaiting more.

I like this idea

Truly unique and I enjoyed the no nonsense Jedi master.

With this being a SW sided story at least at the beginning, it seems obvious to me no one else will be going to be trained in the Force except Harry, true?
Also will there be anyone else who might be grabbed by either side to be his principle nemesis?
Finally will he be forced to NOT have a mate or will Katarn not follow that Jedi Edict?
I can assume he's a gray jedi so what will be borrowed from each side will be fun to see develop!

denisud

Very good start so far. Keep it up. Don't let reviews hold you back. Don't let critics tell you not to write anymore. YOu are doing it for your own pleasure.

Another good start of the story.