It is interesting concept and your writing is amazing as always. I look forward to where it goes.

Remarkably well put together for not being bata read.
Does this mean Revenge is near completion? I have enjoyed it for the most part, especially the part where you didn't turn Harry into an oversexed polygamous deviant(that one detail being so frequently explored in your stories is rather...telling). The fact that you continue to be one of my absolute favorites despite your proclivity to hyper-sensualize(is that even a word?), speaks volumes of your incredible gift for writing.
In the end, thank you for so generously sharing your gift. I truly appreciate it, and you.

nice beginning. i look forward to more

Harry Potter raised by Kyle Katarn? There's only one real question here. Will Harry grow a beard his mentor can be proud of?

Kyle Katarn Is so full of win.

Never thought I would like cross over stories, then I started Revenge of the Wizard and now this! Love your writing man, so epic!

Very interesting take, I'm excited to see where this goes!

Very interesting beginning, I look forward to reading more as you release it.

Great new story!

Love it.

Why does Kyle Katarn rule the universe with a will of Iron? Because Neville Longbottom lets him :D

K

great start!

Good start. Looking forward to the rest.

Reading revenge of the wizard as well, and THINK you may have outdone that whole storyline in just this one chapter, family.

Please don't drop this before completion. Looks like it's going to be a classic.

Interesting start. I like very much your take on Kyle Katarn. Timeline wise, where are we in relation to birth and deeds of Darth Caedus?

The Kyle Katarn side of the force strikes again.