great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more)

Since Kyle Katarn is quite possibly the most interesting character in the extended universe and one of my personal favorites I am extremely glad to see this story.
Thank you for writing.

Great chapter Update soon

I'm liking what I am seeing so far. Thanks for another sw hp xover

Looking very interesting. Will have to wait to give more input until there is more to read and base an opinion on.

good first chapter .. its sad to hear your going to be finished posting soon your an amazing writer, i am sure you have your reasons for doing this. so i wont try to persuade you to keep writing. that would be an insult to your intellect and good nature.

This is really really good. But I must request that you don't fall into the time skip trap. Please if you continue the story make the next few chapters about his training. Don't just drop him in England fully trained 12 years later.

Promising beginning. Also an interesting choice to have Harry not go to Hogwarts, although having Kararn also go as an instructor could still work.

The only bad part is right at the end where you say "...last two stories..." :)

An interesting beginning. I hope you do make an actual story out of this :)

Brilliant start!

I enjoyed this chapter. I am finding it hard to find good stories that catch and hold your interest. Yours do this and I think I will miss your writing when you quit if you have just two stories left to publish. I look forward to see where you take this story.
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Awesome start.

I just want to say, always been a fan of your stories, but this one... I'm really excited to read more.

The beta thing could maybe catch a couple typos here and there, but it can be betaed afterwards too. All in all it looks like a keeper.

Wow! This is amazing! You are amazing!