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To tell the truth, in the final line I was expecting to read something like Shaak abruptly leaving her seat and run to the bathroom to regurgitate loudly, leaving Ranma looking in her direction petrified, and the force giving a raspberry or giggling sensation to both of them.

Wait, why Ranma didn't notice the spy cameras? He is supposed to be able to feel being in the camera lens for extended periods, even a lot before of Herb or the Phoenix tribe arcs, as is shown when he fights against the chameleon.

No normal peopel are much weaker than people that can run at full speed throught the tree canopy

Thank you for this story it was one of my favorites! Now just to wait for the epiloge, i liked the space battle it was intence and finally ranma spanked the daughter i was waiting for it since the moment he says he would spanked her. Once again thanks for the story i will keep checking your others works

typo notification in several parts through out this chapter Talli's name is replaced with Scout

Awesome story and congrats on completing it! Sure, it could have gone on longer, but it wasn't truly necessary unless you wanted to. You brought it to a solid and enjoyable ending. I can't ask more than that. I was never a huge Ranma fan, but I really enjoy your writing with him. Maybe at some point I'll give one of the others more of a chance despite fandoms that I otherwise largely don't care for. You have a gift for writing that few others have. If the mood ever strikes you, I'd love to see a Worm story pop up. Either way I'll keep watching and reading and I'm excited to see what will replace this story in the queue.

Thanks for the grand tale of daring do..

thank you :)

Tied up all the really major issues. As you indicated the lesser issues others can handle.

You still need to proof read. Several times times it was obvious you had rewritten the sentence/paragraph and left multiple artifacts/parts of the original. Also you really should be more careful when using a spell checker. Having "He tan to the store." has all words correctly spelled but "He ran to the store." I think is what you wanted to say. The wrong word, not even close to what you meant was used multiple times and not just in this chapter.

I will admit I would like to see 1 or 2 chapter sequels. Just something like 6 months/years down the road, Anakin or someone is doing something and they come across Ranma and crew and say, "We have this job and it would really help and maybe save a few lives if you were there." Not a full arc, just interjections into your revised Star Wars mythology.

Ranma did, as almost always get over-powered at the end but just barely enough to make the victory possible. Further there were still more powerful he really could not hope to ever reach the power level of.

I find the best part of these crossovers of yours, is my need to dive into the Wikipedias for bits of information I’ve long forgotten. Keep going always looking forward to the next update.

Damn, that was a good story. I started reading it last month and a quite surprised to see it end. But it's an excellent place to end, I really enjoyed this.

...why would ranma change back in the middle of a battle when all the friendlies saw him as a girl? That's a great way to get shot at in the back. It didn't really offer much of an advantage either. Ranma is capable thick ass future doors off like a god-damned super wookie. There's literally no one that ship that could take ranma male or female version .

A really great story. I quite liked it. About the only thing I would have liked more of is more Ranma and Tallie time.

Now that this is complete, perhaps one you are settled into your new living situation maybe you can move to one of the other Ranma stories that have not been updated in some time, like:
- Sword, Bow, and Horse
- Gods and Devils and Wild Horses, Oh My
- The Effect of a Horse and a Dragon
- A Semblance of Hope
- Changes to the Food Chain: DvC book 2